I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!
an enjoiable story althoug a Little short
As always this author delivers 10/10/10/20/100 xD So many good pieces I could explode! Now exploring the villain world! Noah is an interesting character best one yet!
The idea was good, but I don't know why, by the third chapter I felt completely stupid reading it...
I like it bcuz it football and I hate it when it's about assist. even irl no one care about assist, no matter how beautiful your assist is, you still forgotten by the scorer. what a waste of good novel
Words cant describe how good a book is you have to read it and since everyone is different some might not like this but i personally recommand this and support it with ur stones as the story is nice and is frequently updated by the author
** if you read though my entire comment then wow thanks for reading i guess
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This book is way too awesome to be alone.
The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page.
loved this book.
The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction.
keep it up
Honestly, way better than I expected. I can see this novel becoming a top 50 novel in the future if it keeps its pace. Even when I first read Shadow Slave, it only had around 20 chapters and now it's consistently in first and I think this novel has the potential. While it's not completely original, no system novel is, however, this roleplay system seems very unique to me and an interesting take on the genre. I also often am surprised at the authors choices and in fact proud that she or he can avoid common tropes and mistakes. I am looking forward to this novel growing. It has potential, don't ruin it author or drop it. I will hunt you down.
Ok I'm confused. Which story should I listen to because one story just changes to anime in the middle of the whole thing. It went from Debbie to some girl name Mya and mutliverves.
YO Y DID U LET HIM HAVE A WIFE AND KIDS WHEN HE HAD HIS CHILDHOOD FRIEND THAT LOVED HIM!!?? ITS PRETTY MESSED UP AND MAKES THIS BOOK KINDA SUCK!! I ACTUALLY DONT REALLY LIKE IT ANYMORE!! MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I CAN ONLY TEXT WITH CAPS!
Shameless Author here! hey guys I am the author of this book and I have got to say.... THIS IS THE BEST FOOTBALL NOVEL ON THIS PLANET!!!!!