The World After 9000 Years

Nice plot you have. It's very intriguing and mysterious, I love it! But it would be better if you used some coma ( , ) in your dialogues. That's all I could say basing from my level of experience and level of criticism.

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The book is really nice,although there are few mistakes,the storyline kept me intrigued. The book is also unique cause this is the first time am reading a book like this. Nice work author

The story is nice. Writer did a good job in plot and imagenation.
Story development is very good. Atleast story don't move at snails pace. that is good for readers like me.
Character are designed well. but yes there is still need of some improvement but writer can do that slowly.
Chapter updates quite  regularly.
Writer did a very good job in world background designing. His imagination is quite good.
Story has some flows in terms of grammar . but that can be ignored as it didn't affect me much if the overall all story is good.

overall plot is good to give it a try and worthy of attention.
minor mistakes can be overlooked as this is writes first book.
keep up good work author

Good book and the writing quality good but still there are a few mistakes

it's a must read book, the author has done a brilliant job in defining characters and the Background. once you read it you will come here for more.