Somone explain to me whats going on. i have read about 26 chapters and i am confused. So he has memories for a billIon years? From the same world? Then he gains even more memories from multiple past lives from other worlds?
Check list* Hidden gem yes---- check* New and Interesting idea yes----check* Relatable characters and MC why yes---- checkThe novel gives a new twist to the summoned(returned) hero plot to give a new perspective that can be explored in a "modern" setting plus the writing for the side characters is not bland and emotionless, this allows for a lot of heart felt and relatable interactions. The logic in the world background are well though of, while you might wonder why the old world magic works in the new one it is not that big of a logic leap(gap) plot wise, the way the MC uses magic is reasonable. The comedy is so and so which is a good thing that it does get in the way of the story, most of it though is due to the MC little quirks. Most female MC are either OP queen(mary sue) type characters or pure and weak over reliant meat trophies, which their are more than enough of but the MC (Izo) can be a queen type but she is more of an old veteran/experienced soldier type whose seen it all that just trying to put her life back together in a new environment . this novel is indeed library worthy and people should try it.
Don't really take this novel seriously. This is mainly funny comedy. That said, I like how the author portrayed the characters. It touches all the cliches without being boring and even make fun of it.
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so far, good. I haven't read far but hay reading takes time.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
very good logan liked it all i hope there is more coming do you know if there is another book coming ? looking forwards to the new chapters sdfndfsdsfljdskljfksdljfklsdjfldskjfklsdjfdklsjfdslkfjdsklfjldsjfdslkfjsdljfkdskl
Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia...""him/her" decide"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author notePlease avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)good base, develop it wellif you want an editor yeah i can do someThank youquality not badstability idek so 4development hasnt happeneddesign um yeahworld so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah
Greetings, all! This is my first time writing a novel that will contain many R18 "sessions". CAUTION: you can still turn back now if you're underage... cuz this'll make your hormones spike up. That said, I'm still getting used to writing these stuff so you may find many elements that are similar to other R18 novels. But! As we continue, the chapters will have less elements from other R18 novels. Thanks for your support! Vote, pls! Criticize pls, otherwise I will not improve! Review pls!
Just letting everyone know before hand, the main character IS gender bent. Not just a trap, he plays as a FEMALE character. Not that that is bad, just a warning to let you know. It's not my cup of tea because of that and the writing is about average but, it's your call and I'm sure that there are many people that will love this story. Good luck, Author-san and I hope that your story is loved by many!
A refreshing POV that isn’t too commonly seen. Unlike a transmigration into a game world or living as an NPC, or even a dungeon master novel, it seems to be more like a game development storyline.The original title is 地下城玩家.Haven’t read very far but looking forward to see how the story continues to develop.
Written after chapter 108 :I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed :The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUPu202f!!!(of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless)Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring…And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings.And I have great hopes for what will follow.I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced.And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together.That’s how you are supposed to play such games…Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such.Notes :Writing Quality : 4,5/5=> here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for meStability of Updates : 3/5=> my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so…Story Development : 5/5=> so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game storyCharacter Design : 5/5=> the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-)World Background : 5/5=> Real city names. Period.
Hilariously addictive. Spirit Sword Mountain features an out-of-the-norm main character, who wants to cultivate inside the sect. However there are several twists, and they all come in very fun forms. The first arc is incredible and more than enough to get anyone hooked with this novel. Give it a try! It's super fun!