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hey I read the story and it is really good and interesting. And author I have a suggestion if you can do it. The suggestion is that can you add brackets for AI like when AI talks can you add brackets like [Add like this ] so it will make it more appealing
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It is a pity that there are no updates to the chapters and that the story has been abandoned. It was going to be fun. I wonder if it will continue one day or if someone will do a similar story.
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Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.
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Okay, Feng Gui. Just... Feng Gui. This man is absolutely everything and I need everyone to understand what a good father he is. Let me paint you a picture: his son makes fish soup that's the most delicious thing he's ever tasted, and what does he do? He doesn't just accept it. He asks HOW. He's genuinely curious, genuinely proud, and when Yu Yan explains the hand root trick, Feng Gui doesn't dismiss it—he processes it, he learns from it, he becomes better because of his son's knowledge. That's not just good parenting, that's emotional maturity most adults don't have. And the scene where he washes the dishes after Yu Yan eats? The text says "Feng Gui didn't let Yu Yan do any more work." He's feeding his son, learning from his son, and then cleaning up after his son—all while being a tribe leader who could absolutely delegate this stuff. The fact that he's humble enough to say "I'll listen to you" when Yu Yan suggests blanching vegetables? Chef's kiss. Absolutely chef's kiss. Then there's Xin Yu, who shows up first thing in the morning not out of obligation but genuine curiosity and respect. He doesn't demand the recipe; he asks humbly, offers to help, and learns willingly. And Shuo Xing—this bright, energetic kid who just wants to taste the soup his uncle made—his enthusiasm is infectious. The whole dynamic between these characters feels so natural, like a found family slowly weaving itself together around this one guy who knows how to cook. But what really got me was the moment Feng Gui chuckles softly when Yu Yan uses his wings to block the sunlight. There's this quiet tenderness in that scene—two beings sharing a nest, a father watching his child sleep, the warmth of an ordinary morning. It's understated but it hits hard. This relationship isn't built on grand declarations; it's built on shared meals, practical help, and the kind of love that shows up in small daily moments.
For the 39 chapters, quite decent. It's pretty similar to "Family Cultivation: I Can Store My Ability do Understand
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Definitely the best story out of this batch. Even IF the story sucks later, the writing quality is very high these 60 chapters. It's the first time I see a fluffy Xianxia with other elements added to the story. All perfectly executed cliches! It's slowly progressing to a serious xianxia. I have a lot of high expectations but also a bit skeptical since I'm not sure where it's going. I can only hope there's no Harem and Master Deer being Main Heroine.