Well written and paced, this story will definitely appeal to fans of the genre.
I feel that the book is very well written and the idea presented is for the most part quite new and has great potential for exploration. Loved the book, big up to the author
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TL;DR: What starts as a potentially interesting premise is completely wasted, and this story is not worth the premium price. I hope the author continues to write, because there are occasionally interesting ideas presented, but it's clear they're still at the early stages of the craft.This story is a mess. Some readers won't be able to stop reading, like looking at a train wreck. You know it's horrible, but you can't look away.I am not one of those readers, so I'm getting off the bus here.The first 30 chapters are almost completely unrelated to what happens after. What was the point?The grammar is unbelievably bad. Like, machine-translation levels of bad. Good luck figuring out what genders characters are, as their pronouns are constantly changing. As are skill names, and everything else. Don't bother trying to follow the numbers, those are inconsistent as well.And, several chapters are just copy-paste from wikipedia, down to the footnote markers[3]. Copy-paste that seems to be machine-translated.It's a mess. I regret the time I spent reading the first 70+ chapters. Am I masochist? Plus, reviews are reportedly being removed. What was the point of writing this review then?
The story is soooo amazing and the actions are heart warming but please if u can at least update the always for us. Please am dieing to see the end of the story
As of right now, im only on chapter 15 but im loving it so far!Writing quality: Really good! No spelling or grammer mistakes that i saw.Update stability: Its good! Cant really say anything else about it :)Story development: Really good! Its not your cliche hero novel where the hero becomes OP in the second chapter. The story is thought out! Character design: Great! Although the mc has yet to kill any monsters, thats why its great! The mc was overweight so he has to lose some first before being able to kill some monsters. Also the other side characters are great! World background: ??? Gave it a 5 star because why not. ?Overall, READ THIS! You will not be disappointed.
Let me get this point out of the way, It's funny, it's hella fun to read for short I really liked it. Good luck author I'm expecting more to come, Kudos to you!
Gosh! ! why did they cut the chapters back to 40! I still want to read! !! !! ???????????????????????????????????
Calling out old cultivators!!!Calling out old cultivators!!!Calling out old cultivators!!!Calling out old cultivators!!!Calling out old cultivators!!!
The story is wonderful. He acts very similar to katou kid, the only parts that I did not like were that he got partners and that the story stopped in the middle of a chase. With his system he could have done it by himself. The story does not get to the part where the partners have helped him before the story stopped. The story is written very well, I only noticed one flaw where the detective suspected something he had no reason to suspect.
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Well wasn't that an interesting start. There were only two chapters out when this review was written, but it is fully deserving a full five stars!At the beginning I kinda wanted to dislike the MC. The whole of first chapter was very weird for me. I was full of complex emotions, but then I read the final sentence and a shiver ran down my spine. Then I came to the second chapter, not sure what to expect. But upon reading it I found that I really liked it! I really am looking forward to where this author will take the story, it is quite intriguing and exciting. writing is good, don't know about stability of updates yet, but story development s good, character design is good, world background hasn't been seen much yet.