This story has a fresh and unique story plot. It is really interesting. Keep it up author. I will support you on this and follow this story. I am looking forward how the little kid's life will change after the discovery.
The plot is interesting but I find the characters childish and gullible. The grammar is also very horrendous and this is the worst part. Although the story is interesting, the grammar is really annoying and worsens the story, even if I’m able to read it.
i quite like this novel. the author must have spend quite the time thinking about the world and the characters to create such interesting history
Hey everyone, Enigma014 reporting, So this is my first time writing a novel, and I am not a native English speaker; I first write in my native language, then translate it, edit it, then upload it. As I am the only author, translater, and editor, I assume there may be many mistakes and wrong word usage, but I promise I will improve. So I hope you will all give this novel a chance. With this, I will end this. So everyone, my friend, brother, sister, or anyone who is going to start reading my novel. WELCOME TO THE WORLD OF MY IMAGINATION.
I like this novel a lot but, I wish the updates were more consistent, because I want to read more of this great story. Alas, I can't because it hasn't been updated.
Good grammar and world development, I'm caught up in the story even though it's still in the baby phase...............................................................
Love the story so far. Whether it be the writing quality, the pace of the story, and depth of characters, I can it’s very well done. The beginning was a little rushed at some part like the training, but it makes sense because the story really doesn’t even start until the mc is untrapped. Also, the stability is pretty good, one and sometimes even two a day! Again, awesome story and I hope you get the recognition you deserve soon. Please keep updating!
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Good. Pretty good in my opinion. Unique transmigration plot despite there being a little bit of redundancies when writing. Appreciating this novel, I hope others take a chance and read this novel.
The author has great creativity and wonderful story progression. So if you want a good read, this is a good story.However, i get easily taken out of the novel due to the constant mix up between past tense and present tense. I can hardly stand the usage of present tense in a novel.Please just choose one and roll with it. The first few chapters have really bad grammar. I don’t know if the writer is native english or not so I don’t want to judge. So I jumped to the middle of the novel and to the latest chapters. The grammatical mistakes improved somewhat which is good but they are still fairly noticeable. The writer still mixes up past and present tense by the end of it. Also, be sure to use commas in correct areas within sentences.I also think that instead of going into details on the materialistic aspect of the story such as appearance, go in-depth into the character's emotions. it's hard to relate to them without a better understandingThe novel has a good story. If you can get past the glaring mistakes, it should be a good way to pass the time.
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Shameless Author's review.You'll find crazy adventures, Sophisticated, intelligent MC and strong Female Lead that helps MC to achieve his goals.Well, this book is the longest that I've written.Kinda scuffed by the algorithm, but I promise you won't disappointed.Cheers! Happy Reading!