(Hiruzen) "That would be ok."
Shortly after, Lin Lin slammed the back door open and ran to me with a cup of water.
The ship that earlier was travelling towards the mothership finally reached its destination then that ship got swallowed up by the mothership, then inside that mothership a latch opened and that ship got parked, then the door of the ship opened and 5 humanoid figure came out of the ship, 5 were wearing long black hooded robes, but one can see from the stature that they are very tall and wide and from the aura they emits it's like they've gone through various battles and bloodshed. After they set foot off the ship to mothership they started heading towards someplace, wherever they go through, all the alien species soldiers go down to their knees to salute them, after a while of walking they encountered a door, then the door opened and all 5 of them entered the room other side of the door, when they entered two out of five knelt down, after few steps same thing occurred two out of three knelt down and finally after few steps the final robed person knelt towards the direction "WE GREET THE LORD!" all 5 of them said, after sometime a strange voice replied to them with a question "what's the status of the task given to you?" without delay of a second, the one kneeling in the front replied " lord we found him, he is living in a backwater planet earth in 1900007th galaxy. We made sure not to be found, what we found is that, he is living there with a kid he claims to be his grandson". Hearing the word grandson the voice on other side said in a roaring voice "how can that be!, didn't we killed all the kin of that dammed ADAM STONE including Ray, Mira and that beast of theirs".
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Then the man began speaking to her, saying, "I know, don't worry. My subordinates might be dull but I recognized him immediately. It'll take a few moments of fighting for them to come to their senses and understand who was the true problem before them. For now, we'd better look at your head."
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Good writing. The writing has a vague feeling for me. I can tell where it’s getting at but not feel it entirely. I think trying to set the scene a little more.
"G-g-grandma?"
"I can completely say with full faith that you look even more beautiful than Sis Ziyun when she married!I'm not even trying to compliment you at this point." She grinned unable to take her eyes off Xiao Ning-er.
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"That will measure the capacity of this school to handle critical matters. It hasn't been occur on history tough, it's always a month of preparation before a crown prince would visit the academy to look for his suitable bride. That is always the case here, however this time it will be different."
Carelessly revealed secret information and almost put her own master in danger.