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The character doesn't act like a normal human being. Literally everyone would wonder what suddenly happened to him but he still keeps trying to show off without control.
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A very interesting take on the reincarnation plot device. I found myself enjoying every chapter as there were many surprises on the way. The author brings up many interesting points and the look into what plant cultivation may be like is also very fresh and new.The story features many likeable characters, from Elanor to Laurel, from John to Joe. You'll find yourself smiling warmly at the antics of the 'hill friends'.The comedy is not laugh out loud funny, it may appeal to others more as everyone has a different sense of humour. However that does not mean I did not find it entertaining, I found myself finding many sentences quite humorous, I would say it was on the verge of making me giggle like a little school girl but not laughing out like a crazed hyena. Yet again, it may be different for others. For me, the comedy was not the strong point of this novel, but how interesting and creative it was, I found myself reading each chapter and becoming increasingly interested in the cultivation system and the world in general, some questions are answered and some are not, this makes a good balance of mysteriousness.The quality of writing is very decent, the only problem that the author suffers from is the lack of commas in some places, I read quite fast and I sometimes became confused for a second when a sentence changed topics. Other than this, everything else about the literacy quality is great and there are little to no problems to be found. In conclusion, this is a novel that I will constantly keep coming back to as long as the Author keeps on writing, unfortunately this novel is not getting the full attention it deserves as evidenced by the low number of comments on each chapter, but I feel that as long as the Author keeps this up, this may very well change. Which I hope it does as this story is quite entertaining.Rating:Writing Quality 4Stability of Updates 4Story Development 5Character Design 5World Background 4Final Rating: 4.4
This is a very well planned and written novel. I've read your other works and I have to say you are one of my favorite authors. on a side note. Thank you!!! As a Knicks fan I have to say this for giving us a moment to shine, even if it isn't reality.
The story started out good, but in the end the author demonstrated his disabilities and prejudices.Without saying that the story is total plagiarism, with 180 chapters, I have already seen the plot of 3 films.1 ° The Mist, launched in 2008.2 ° The Hills Have Eyes, released in 2006.3rd Taken, launched in 2008.I read in HTML and other films will appear in the future, including Resident Evil.Without saying that the Universe of History is in the Marvel World, which does everything above, say that this story is a Fan-fic.Not to mention that the Author of History doesn't even change the names of the characters, being total plagiarism!So I don't understand why the chapters of this story are blocked, and it's just a fan-fic.
From the summary, it looks like other novels, which I really like. I can't wait for this novel to come out. Well, the review need 140
So good. I couldn't put the book down and I can't wait for the next chapter to be loaded.
A tale of two people from different worlds hurting but manage to save one another. In the process fall in love.
Don’t waste your money on this book. Started as a good read but author turned storyline to the stupidest. I hope everyone stops reading this novel and wasting there money.
such a great story. love the progression
Are there any other novels similar to this book? Any help would be greatly appreciated! Wish this book had at least been proofed. The amount of grammar, spelling, getting names mixed up AND the redundancy. But good plot character development. And the writer didn’t even make an attempt at romance.
I really do like this story
