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The synopsis is a lie. I don't believe that the story is the worst thing out there but it is definitely not great. At the very least you should pay attention to the synopsis.
So far there is one thing that is killing the story a bit for me. The translation. His combat power fluctuates up and down between chapters, the level of his skills is S on one chapter then SSS on the other. MC could be making more trades, but he doesn't. It's not a bad series, but it's not something that will become a top novel.
The story was pretty decent until Chapter 25 in which the author completely strips the main character of his one quality.The first 25 chapters do some interesting world building that I can't really say whether it's good or not but it's definitely different. The main drive to read the series was the main characters "level 999" strength as described in the description of the novel but for some god forsaken reason the author completely trashes the novel at chapter 25 by completely ruining the entire build up and story up to that point since the entire novel was based on his strength.Honestly the author should either start a new novel and try not to ruin it. Or reboot the novel but with the same world but have the character start at 1. So everyone doesn't feel like they wasted their time reading a power fantasy novel without power.
Alright Let's Begin,1.Writing quality is bad.It's hard to understand what's going on due time skips and grammatical errors.2.Story development so far is good.3.Character design.... how should I put this it is good and bad at the same time(What am I even writing LOL...)4.Yup, world background is pretty good.The story has potential if executed correctly dude focus on grammatical errors(They Suck)That's allBEST OF LUCK
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A low quality The World Online that just jumps straight into the story without any real introduction.Quite boring and has very few details.If you havent read The World Online, read that instead. If you have, this will only be that much harder to read.
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There are grammatical mistakes in the synopsis..... really? How bad the quality of the translation then? Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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