Hey, everyone. Thank you for taking a look at my novel. As for many, this is my first attempt at writing, so I welcome constructive criticism.There will be many things - transmigration, a system with a small twist, earning money while trying to cultivate and navigate through school. I just have too many interests, but I believe I will be able to incorporate them all in a healthy way.There are two things I dislike in novels that first come to mind - meaningless nationalism and stupidly huge harems. I will try to address both. The school is, in fact, an international experimental school, and while I cannot refuse myself the pleasure of writing a harem novel, I will do my best to keep it romantic, realistic and not over-the-top. Also, this first chapter was just a test of site's functionality. Stable updates will start from August, 1.With that said, I shall shamelessly rate myself with 5 stars and invite you again to add Model Citizen to your library and take a look again in a few days!
I really like the way it's going hope the system stays relevant and the characters fun to read about. Um now i don't really know what to type. I can't spell so you know. I will how tell anout Rick. Rick is a asshole but he doesn't mean to be. But why could he be one.
Like other works of this author. It has great potential but it burns everything making days pass like months and never-ending loops of infodumps and worse repetition of plot to re-explain what happened 3 seconds ago(or 3 chapter ago by lenght of filler). Character don't get aby deep all of them are copies of the first one(old man1, old man2,old man3. chic1,chic2,chic3... genius1 etc etc)
Stories about going into a game and conquering it are near and dear to my heart. It's why I thoroughly enjoyed the first few chapters of this novel. And I can't wait to keep reading more. I just paused to write this review. The writing is great with very, very few grammatical issues that don't break the flow of what's written down. The world inside the game is interesting and--just by the number of races and job classes--will no doubt contain plenty of fun characters to meet. Al's a decent character you'll want to follow because you want him to succeed. He's had a tragic thing happen to him and you feel like rooting for him to do well in the game. Obviously, SARS is my favorite character in this story. An AI with a 'tude' that really adds a freshness to the whole thing. I enjoy the story so far. Looking forward to more!
sometimes it's hard to identify who is talking to. the story is good but you post me by killing the maid. I personally don't like tragedy driven plot, it makes me feel depressed when a character I like die.
First, for the 3rd time...I keep track u see...????................................................................ .....................................
this is a pretty good fic, a hidden gem, I say give it a try, you won't regret it. the MC here is rational, goal oriented and evil. something very rare in web novel, give this a try, you won't regret it. been reading this since day 1 as I used to read the author's previous fic too, but I can see massive improvements.
Horrible novel. Full of cockroach side characters who miraculously survive just because of the author wanting to continue the plot.horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible
Wouldn’t mind reading more, just not worth paying for 83 chapters based on the free ones due to large errors and forgetfulness.Hopefully Webnovel changes the system some day.
Website : qidian china Views : 1.48 million Rating : 7.8(122) Chapters : 1182Status : completed Word count : 2.60 million author rank : lv5
I don't know about story development or the translating quality or the stability of this novel yet.But, I really like this kind story when MC not that kind of 'saintly' but the 'evil'...And I just kinda think if the MC wanna be villain but act as if he was a hero (save people along his way/save every beauty in his way/tell every person and acting silly about his destiny to be villain), I WILL really REALLY DROP IT..Well, I hope not...So I think I will waiting for update ^_^
this story is really shallow and its plot parts dont fit to eachother or just ignore eachothers existence. introduction of livestreams later was pointless and cringe. story without real direction and plot, just for self satisfaction.