Invite Codes Look And Put Ur Own So We Can Gain More Spirit Stones

Not good. Very weird. Read it and see for yourself. The plot is strange and the writing is odd. We get a ton of system novels, but the premise of this one is just odd.

this story is really shallow and its plot parts dont fit to eachother or just ignore eachothers existence. introduction of livestreams later was pointless and cringe. story without real direction and plot, just for self satisfaction.

you should not take this review seriously i am just righting this to get the daily reward for writing a review on a story. this book is great.

A very novel approach for the narration of the story, it takes a bit more time from the reader to get into this alternate world but once in you would get hooked. Keep up the good work author.

First off, thank you author for sharing your work. I think the world you built is pretty interesting and the premise is as well. Unfortunately the characters are super thin especially the female lead. The writing quality is mediocre as well. The biggest issue however, is the female lead and her interactions with mc. Without developing a real relationship or at least a believable one, she becomes an integral part of his life and plot.  Her character and mc’s reactions to her make me cringe.  This story would be a 3.5 or 4 if she was removed.

Hello, author here. I'll put this novel in 5 stars shamelessly hohoho ? anyway, enjoy reading a cute, fluffy but also a thrilling adventure of Ain, our baby mafia, in bringing her family to the top of mafia world! Expect only cute and adorable plots all the way (no blatant violence). Also romance is fluffy & sweet (remember both ML & FL will be children until a few hundred chapters!) in the end, happy reading~