Jens : "What do you mean… Little King…?"
"I am sorry elders. I have taught my disciple poorly and am willing to accept any form of punishment on his behalf."
Huh?"
Hay love the novel is super underrated but keep up the good work and if possible can u update the wiki it is only updated till chapter 1200
The grammar and missing words are killing my brain cells. Whilst the story does have potential, it is squashed by the inconsistent MC(the humanoid monster-killing dilemma+just bad decisions) and the bad worldbuilding. The whole thing feels like a bad superhero movie. The action does pull me in but that is where it stops. There is no ˇ"meat" to this novel, there is no motivation, the bear surrenders just couse the author wanted to. In conclusion, if the author fixes his grammar this could get a 3 star rating and as for the story I just don't know.
This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels.
It’s seem a good story, waiting to see how it will develop
I hope you don't drop this book like other authors
Writing quality - 4 stars: Some terms are inconsistent like the type of the weapon, wether it's a sword or saber.Story Development - 4 stars: There's no unreasonable increase of strength but no clear distinction of the cultivation/martial realms. There's a character growth as the story progress.Character Design - 4 star: There's a substance (somehow) which is good enough for me but some character are not describe clearlyUpdating Stability - 1 star: Welp this is a trial read so...Wold Backgroud - 3 stars: No extensive explaination, only the the name of the Kingdom and its enemy on war plus revolt caused by bandits.
I liked how the protagonist didn't jump to rescue anyone, and isn't an a-grade asshole. Nor did he take advantage of his power when the girl rejected him. He didn't kill the cultivator, and even gave him his house for information, also warning. He didnt go on disrespecting and slaughtering any one, so his moral character and views seem to be idealistic but not overly so. The writing though could use some editing. Looking forward to other chapters. Do get a beta reader and an edited please.
Onee chan = sister / onii chan = brotherOnly 5 chapters at the moment can't say to mutch yet.I will give a better rating in the future hope you don't drop it
Im giving it a five star because every cahpter is entertaining for me and the story is not on the cliche side of startBut im very confuse in their emotional stateAuthor tend to contradict of what their saying and thingking to what theyre doing(you know the the i hate you but love you at the same time and the most important person in my life but not as a family and the most powerfull person then there is another that also the most powerful man in the world)I might chage the rating in the future though