It started of great but after reading until 40 chapters, some characters temperament or personality seems unfitting for their image the way the author portrays them. Makes me cringe when I try to visualize a Venerable Dragon saying the most weird stuff. It has a really good starting point and potential however it went lackluster and out of taste. This is just my opinion and no hate to the author.
Why does everything have to be so huge? It makes absolutely no sense. The golden horned beast is supposedly 400km tall, doesn't that just seem ridiculously needless? 400m would be enough and is a much more relatable height. I can't fucking imagine 400km. I can't imagine being next to something 400km tall. Hell, it's actually impossible to see the entire 400km fucking thing at once. Fucking imagine you're standing in space as a 1.8m tall human(Luo Feng), talking or looking at a being that's 400 km tall. It just makes no fucking sense. That's a fucking sixth of Pluto's diameter. It's basically a very small (dwarf) planet. Now imagine you're this small human standing on this planet. You're pretty much invisible, can't be spotted. So how would a fucking 400km tall beast ever put anybody into its eyes? Then there's the fact that the author can't keep his world building straight. First, it's said that space rings can't contain living things. Sure, I'll go for that. But then Luo Feng puts the mother nest inside his internal world, despite not being sector lord in his main body yet and no-one fucking questions it. According to the story, he can't put it in his space ring, so Dylan would know he didn't do that. But hey, my dude Dylan also "knows" he doesn't have an internal world. SO HOW THE FUCK DOES HE STORE THAT SHIT WITH NO-ONE QUESTIONING IT? And why the **** do we spend so much time on upgrading the golden-horned beast when in the 670 chapters I've read so far it's barely been used at ALL. It's only appeared for a few chapters and I'm pretty sure that was 300+ chapters ago. No need for all this filler. Also, for a supposed sci-fi space story, the world building is very surface level. I'll give a few examples. 1. Apparently, the human universe is using the length of earth's days as the most common measurement. Why? 2. The constant references within the story like "Gold are as strong and piercing as the sun" make even less sense. The sun? Earth is a fucking irrelevant planet within the universe, why would this be a common saying? There are many other cases like this too. 3. There are so many Chinese names despite the author's intention to portray the universe as a multicultural thing. 4. Apparently, China's mental training is fucking amazing hey-ho and barely anyone else does mental training unless they're a high level undying. Wtf my dudes??? With the universe portrayed as this GIANT thing with trillions of humans in a single galaxy of which there are trillions more. Why wouldn't mental training be more developed and common? Isn't it unlikely that an aboriginal irrelevant planet would have some of the most advanced stuff in this regard? Really doesn't make sense in the context of the story. Oh yeah and a final tip for you translator. Write 120 million instead of 1.2 hundred million. Oh, and when you actually do it that way, write 910 million instead of 910 hundred million. Oh, whoever's editing this might wanna step up. Like there are some serious issues in pretty much every single chapter with wrong tenses, words, misspellings etc. Like names are actually sometimes spelled 3-4 different ways in 1 chapter alone.
i dont think the title fits the novel, this novel should be called the i can break up a couple, its not considered cheating if the girl didn't get close or kiss the mc all the girl did is break up with his current boyfriend, and the mc is a beta mc who dont like girls
Reached out u r is a great day morning I love u I wanna buy used for my baby shower and my bike in the shower I had to shower bb I wanna was the time I was going on the bike to get u r was a great time with the game I had a game of play one of u I wanna is time to come home night was a game night it is
an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them
I would give you 5 stars across the board but you should really go through your work while posting. Im not on to really care about grammar error or anything like that but the amount of mistakes and errors you have made in the first few chapters is unbelievable. Other than your mistakes everything else is pretty good. You have good background for your world and came up with a few names. Overall this book would have been pretty good if you corrected your mistakes before posting. Or if you still wanna write just run your chapter through a word program that fixes your mistakes for you.
I like the way this novel was written, the wonderful works and story background. I can't help but admire the author, To author: work hard, I'll be following your work from now on.
Not what I was looking for.Let's start with the good things - grammar is pretty good, updates are frequent, most of the characters are believable.Unfortunately, I can't read a story where an MC should be a 32 yo man, but behaves according to his new age of 12. Literally nothing of his behavior suits his alleged mental age. And when I see a teenager protagonist I drop the story on the spot, no exceptions.The story also has a dense teenager romance going on, which is always a turn off. Oh, and the system has mandatory quests with punishments for failing aka the worst kind of system. But system stuff is not a focus of the novel and generally only used to show people's stats, so that part is bearable.
This novel is sooo much more exciting with women as the protagonist. The girl is so strong-willed and cute. And the plot is fun. Just hopinh the translation is faster.
interesting story by author for ****** a female mc in apocalyptic themed story bc thats rare for me to see. the mc lin sanjiu is not your typical female char that usually popped up on apocalyptic themed story. she is brave, got really interesting abilityim looking forward for more chapter.the translator was doing a good job except when translating the zombie creature or monster by using pinyin. please change the monster name with something else
Sorry, I'm Done. Won't be reading this anymore. Now you want me to pay you $30 a month to read LN on webnovel.com? NO thanks I can get Cable TV for that price. Or i can get NetFlix for $10 a month. Far Far better price than this. And Don't tell me they release non-premium chapters since there hasn't been a single one in over 2 weeks starting after chapter 257.
Why no updates