The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly...This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
Modern time, mc's 30 year old and discovers that he gained abnormal activities in his life, like vomiting after eating and increasingly better eyesight.-UNLIKE most mc's who will immediately come on the conclusion that they changed race, the mc actually thinks on why he transformed and why is he getting stronger.-He does research on his own body and looks up on internet. Story development in the first 54 chapters are related to mc researching his own body changes while also with some story here and there like for example a robber and a supernatural event.-Yes, of course the novel can't go further without anything to write about, so MC isn't the only one with the abilities he has. But for now, I say he's the only human with the 'mutations'. And yes, he drinks blood for nutritions and energy.-There's one potential female lead, but I dunno if it's gonna be harem - Advanced readers, please reply if you know!-Translation Quality: Noice - 5*SoU: Trial read - 5*Story development: Could be better, but not bad in it's own right - 4.5*Character design: Good - 5*World Background: only 60 chapters, but it's has some mystery at the end so - 5*
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Try to give it another try by reading another chapter, but there seems to be no plans to cure your supreme level stupidity and naivety. It is a human abortion.
I don't like it. I don't know how I read up to 105. Wait, I do know. If you are just looking for some thing to mindlessly read in the middle of the night while the alternative is to sleep, this is for you. It has the faint stench of harem development about it.
Cool story.. Has a vibes of death notes.! ?I love their unfamiliar names... So new to me..??I admit it, I enjoy MC's wittiness.. Involving the readers in such matter was smart move...Writingvquality just need a little polishing..I don't know about the others, but in my opinion, it's better not to repeat the last paragraph as the opening words of the next chapter..Overall, great job.Keep it up..??
Now i k pw that this has been dropped last time i looked. But is their any way for a translator to pick it back up. If you get pased the authers dislike of the Japanese its not a bad series, and of any on can direct me to any thing translated to engish pasted the 170 chapter i would go read it.
i was curious about this book at first, but my curiousity died quickly because of the extremely poor grammer. the spelling is fine. but the sentence structure is awful. please get an editor to help you streamline a sentence, so that is isnt so cluncky.
Honest ReviewThe Good: Love the background of this! Nothing very new, but still different than a standard video game novel. I also like it that it doesn't have any reincarnation or some other cheat system like so many on here do.The Bad: MC started out good, but he suddenly went dumb around chapter 44... The women swoon over the MC waaay to easily, the plot convenience is very strong in this, like how does he happen to find a legacy item when the hundreds of thousands before him missed it? The gaming system itself needs improvement, it feels like the author doesn't have much experience with gaming. This isn't a bad thing, but going 4 months without even getting one level is a little much. Lastly, premium chapters so soon is terrible... It's not hard to tell this is someone's first novel and charging SS for it is a bit shameless. We may love those kinds of characters in novels, but not in real life.
Lord I give you my heartI give you my soulI live for you aloneEvery breath that I takeEvery moment I'm awakeLord have Your way in me
A very very interesting take I must say and I had good reading this haha. A fun novel. Definitely gonna wait for itChapters : 357Status : ongoing~
Expect of Trauma arc everything is great...