Ishq ki dastan the tale of love and betrayal

Story has great potential. Too bad the MC is such a f$cling incompetent fool when it comes to women. A total John Doe yet he has every woman wetting her panties. And of course, this story couldn’t be complete without the most laziest overused trope, the aphrodisiac trope. I really tried sticking thru it but I can’t stand it anymore. Can’t even write a strong female character without her lusting after the MC, smh.

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Modern time, mc's 30 year old and discovers that he gained abnormal activities in his life, like vomiting after eating and increasingly better eyesight.-UNLIKE most mc's who will immediately come on the conclusion that they changed race, the mc actually thinks on why he transformed and why is he getting stronger.-He does research on his own body and looks up on internet. Story development in the first 54 chapters are related to mc researching his own body changes while also with some story here and there like for example a robber and a supernatural event.-Yes, of course the novel can't go further without anything to write about, so MC isn't the only one with the abilities he has. But for now, I say he's the only human with the 'mutations'. And yes, he drinks blood for nutritions and energy.-There's one potential female lead, but I dunno if it's gonna be harem - Advanced readers, please reply if you know!-Translation Quality: Noice - 5*SoU: Trial read - 5*Story development: Could be better, but not bad in it's own right - 4.5*Character design: Good - 5*World Background: only 60 chapters, but it's has some mystery at the end so - 5*

I was a bit cringe at the beginning seeing that It's the same introduction to the other Isekai Manga/Novel I read, specially with OP Ability that was received from a God/Goddess/Entity, but the plot changed my view of the story, sure he is a bit arrogant and clumsy like the other Isekai Mc I know but how he adapts and how he follows what he aspires to be is what made him different from the rest. keep up the good work and keep writing dude, this is a really great book.

Haven't actually started reading this book I'm going to wait for it to get at least 20 something chapters however that's not the sounds really interesting I can't wait to check it out

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