Simple and straight to the point. Characters and their personalities are shown well via interactions, and the overall direction is clear. Some grammar could be checked again, like maybe the tense, or certain things can be just said as it is and not stretched out too far.
Pacing for the story starts off well but there are moments were it's too fast, and may need build up for key moments like events and character development.
Recommended for readers who enjoy an action packed adventure with an MC who clearly wants to rise in strength.
Author why do you go and use your right hand until chapter 111 and then u can see your slow development of your novel? Or u can ask for your mother's help? U have guts to say that your novel will be better after chapter 100 with only 97 characters online?
Good and interesting novel, with a new take on the animal mc. Relly hope to see more!jdjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjh
A lot of characters and background buildings so far. I love the twist. The characters design is good and some are annoying. Anyway, this is a fantastic work.
Great overall, good story good world good characters and waiting for more updates and seems like a really good novel that I want to read more out of.
yes it's another good novel that been fuc, ked by webnovel.??? They have dropped it without any notice.so don't waste your money on it.
Shameless Author here: I would like to thank all of you for reading my fan fic. It just motivates me that so many people would read my fic. And if you have any suggestions please dont be afraid to ask me.
This is a all around 5 stars from me the story how it develops and the action scenes are amazing and I cant wait to read more of it in the future this is a great book for those who want to have action while the character gets stronger steadily and it is also for those who want a mc that can be aloof sometime and caring others!!!!
love the story! could use a bit of editing on the first few chapters but the rest is amazing! look forward to more. im a huge fan of magic technology combo stories! Especially since they are rather rare.
Good book u should read this it had me hooked i loved this story could not stop reading this book until my mom made me do chorus u should definitely read this novel
Welp, considering the recent novel of this author which was posted on this site, yet was dropped in mid-way.I have no hopes for this anyway.Peace out.
This novel is quite similar to God Emperor. The writing is quite good. The MC is calm and intelligent, not like those MC from other reincarnation novels who unbelievably arrogant and stupid.WWuxia novels is enough if it is decent and this novel is quite decent