The story is overall good nothing bad so far(at chapter 23 when writing this)the only real problems I have is the Mc he feels to naive I don’t how to explain this but his mind set and way of doing thing reminds of generic isekai hero it’s not particularly bad but boring for me and btw why hasn’t he official try to learn how to fight use magic or mana control something and lastlyhe is pretty hypocritical with how he treats dragons has monster(I say this because when he first killed he pretty much justified it has they are inhuman)and then he want to befriend them for power honestly I feel he should go for the half dragon evolution and stop treating his humanity like it gold tbh I don’t ’ really understand his mind on this so people explain
I think you should put his system as bestow skill and have some conection with certain god, like god of hunt or god of game maybe. Why? Because it will make it easy to accept where all item from gacha came from. And give some reason why he got that system. Why? Because everthing come for benefit, why would world give you a cheat if you cant give it more benefit.
Good stuff this. Though, it hasn't been updated for a month. Hopefully the author for comes back to this to finish it up. Apparently my review isn't enough characters long yet. Let me try to post again.
This story is top-notch. It is a very different style from the way that I write. While it's no traditional story, it uses a tone/format that a lot of webnovel readers should be familiar with. It has a ranking system that isn't overused, the grammar is excellent, the description is superb, the chapters have a good length, and it is definitely worth a read. The only thing I didn't get as much behind was the character design (from the few chapters I read) because the story wasn't as focused on specific characters but it makes sense in the context of the story.Now
Currently my favourite active book. I am a big fan of all the Er Gen works and Pursuit of Truth does not fail to deliver. Containing the mystery and flavour of Er Gen's I Shall Seal The Heavens and the doom and gloom of Renegade Immortal, Er Gen has succeeded in creating a book that in the future can proudly stand at the forefront of the Chinese Immortal Genre. Thank you for reading my review!
I have been following this story before it got into the official site,and there is a reason why this has me so hooked up. First off,the author. Feng Lian Tian Xia is someone whose works I really enjoy. They are often times very witty,and the comedic undertone really gets me. Regarding this series,this review is valid till chapter 290.The MC is someone who got reborn in the body of someone with a common name. Pretty generic.But it is the relations that he maintains with this sudden family that he gets,which keeps you interested.We get some really good humor in the early parts of the story as well. And then of course come the antagonists,who are..kinda weak.No,they are not your generic antagonists.It is just that the way in which the MC beats them makes you feel that they are weak,when in reality we actually learn quite a bit about them.And they are not really weak.This is a harem,no doubt.But,we have a female lead who was part of his past life.We get many characters from his past life appearing in this life of his.And this makes it very interesting,as he was a Monarch like character back then..and now he is just a weak guy from a lower realm. Till chapter 290,the world building is pretty much standard.There is a long way to go.I would say,read it for the elements that manage to keep this afloat despite the fact that this series is on a similar chassis when compared to the other works of the author. This series is Mango approved!!
Writing quality is awfull. some galfs of the chapters repeat themaelves with a slight difference.Add to that, that it often appears as if some parts are missing and mixed up...story could be good and the concept seems fun, but the charaxters are the typical chinese "i have to hide" and other BAD Cliche stuffthe world background suffers from that too.
Amazing writing skills ?, loving the world background and also loving the MC already. Plot is great and story development seems to be going well too.keep up the good work dear author!
this book is dope really a hidden gem coz it's dope did I mention it's dope important things must be said thrice everything is dope like the author said take a break from cultivation novels ??
Very good book I’m just utterly speechless on how good it is it’s down wright one of the best books I’ve ever read in my life I’ve never been a big reader but this got me into reading
What about? hum ... a tangle of coincidences and dumbnesses, that is all, good read!I can’t read this anymore...Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpx
Esta es la primera vez que hago esto, pero quiero decir, lean eso wevones aunque no sea la original conecta a saitama muy bien one piece, y la escritura de maravilla, como la pija no resivio mas actualizaciones, puede poner el titulo del fanfics en google y le aparecera mas capitulos