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I have only read a few chapters but I can tell the story is off to a really good start, it has a lot of potential, the writing quality is good, the world background is nice even though I am not used to it as yet, overall amazing, keep up the good work.
I really like the concept behind this book which is different from other books. The only complaint I had while reading this book was lagging grammer and sentence formation. Many times it was hard for me to understand the meaning behind the sentences.You have also done silly grammatical mistakes like you haven't used full stop (.) in the end of sentences. At some places you have used I instead of he, His instead of her. Please focus on such mistakes.Your book has potential but no reader will stick to your book for longer if he keeps finding such mistakes again and again.
Here's a different type of traditional wuxia/cultivation novel for you. If I could describe it in a sentence, then it would be; "a brutal, grimdark cultivation novel." There's no empathy and it accurately portrays the harsh, competitive environment, where everyone climbs a mountain of bodies in order to fight for resources and get stronger. Everything makes "sense" and the actions of the MC is logical - though brutal at times. The MC is, what you would call, a "villainous" MC, and the reason for the apostrophe is due to the fact that his actions are sometimes necessary, but it also displays his arrogance and dominance as a talent. You really get a feel for his character in the first chapter, and I'll insert a warning here, it can be *very* jarring. You read it, and then think, "No way can this be the MC. He's a total dick." But because he's a dick and not a spineless, dickless MC, unlike many other traditional wuxia novels, it's refreshing - but in a dark and twisted way. Spoiler here; in the first intro, he had just forced a girl of a rival sect to oral sex, and killed her lover in front her, and then killed her once done. Though the oral part is not mentioned explicitly, it can be deducted, and because the story starts of with the females point of view/backstory, it really portrays the harshness and lack of empathy the MC has. You then keep reading, thinking, "no way is this the MC
This book is amazing....... More chapters plssss
I love reading all of Moonlight Muse’s books! The characters and story is written to where it captivates me and I truly feel for the characters. I can’t wait for the next great creation!...
I absolutely love LOVE this plot! I love how Elle is such a relatable character -- be it her adorable awkwardness or be it her love for food! Overall, a really great read!
great book and worthy of your time to read
Have enjoying this read very much I love the intensity of all the characters. each character is passionate in their own way
a stupid lame fantasy
nice story waiting to read it
love this book