Immortal Ascension with Life system?

Novel is ok, quite bland story, basically just basic level up plot but interesting enough if you are bored. For while.But around c200 author just totally destroyed the story, MC gets skill to fuse with his pets, and lo and behold, this is no longer beast taming novel. MC just fights everyone in his fused state like this is some cultivator story and his beasts are just bloodlines he has. Story just lost even the hint of originality. This already happened with the pet shop story. You can't just make pet/best taming story, and then turn it into freaking hulk smash cultivation story

Amazing writing skills ?, loving the world background and also loving the MC already.       Plot is great and story development seems to be going well too.keep up the good work dear author!

Oh boy here we go.This nivel would deserve 4 stars if not for the bad grammar, although light novels are not measured with the same weight as full books publications, is still a big factor.The plot has its degree of originality, the secondary and antagonist characters are neither all smart and sly nor stupid and agraseve but instead they are a balanced combination of both, like in real life, there is not shortage of idiots that take actions based on instad gratification or pride, but there are also people that will think before acting and realize the benefits and dangers of situations, instead of throwing theur life loke idiots to the MC.MC is not bad, just that his apathic personality is not for everyone taste, he came to the current world when he was on a mission, he had a life and purpose back home and he wants to return, so he doesn't attach much to the people in his current world, he stopped giving a F.The world setting is quite original, yet a bit messy to understand, but I like that instead of a info dump of 5 paragraph describing the world, we get to understand it on information bits placed through the narrative, itbfeels more natural and makes sence, info dumping is something many LN and WN writers do, delivering block of info needs to be properly done or it will negatively impact your work.Finally, update stability is, well, could be better.

A lot of cliches and nonsense. dieing sister, “fixes” a vr helmet ( if you can do that why dont you have a job?), gets a talent to create pets in the vr game( the one good point is i havent seen this exact power ) and proceeded to act like a normal Chinese mc in anyother story. There is little development (other then what the author adds in without much support or thought) and honestly i dislike the mc for some reason

This book starts off well and continues to get better as you continue reading! Cant wait for the next chapter.............................................

because someone asked and corrected my novel, so I made this statement. I have fixed the synopsis, hopefully it will be easier to understand. let me tell you a little plot. so actually there are two story lines, from 2 different novels. one is EEWAO and another is New World which I haven't published yet. the stories of the two novels are interconnected and when EEWAO is finished I will publish New World novel that I myself feel is very very good, because there are lessons in history, culture and so on from all over the world.I created EEWAO to remember my game friends and improve the quality of my writing before I published New World. so I hope when I make New World, the quality will be better. btw I am still learning to write, so your review is very useful for me.