Translation becomes machine translated starting at chapter 170. Do not recommend reading until its fixed to normal translation. A pity. It was a nice novel before that. Will Review as 1 star to shame this decisivo. Would otherwise be around 4 stars.
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Started reading yesterday and have caught up as of just a few minutes ago. I had been searching for a kingdom-building novel for some time now and this really scratches that itch. The characters Jun meets feel genuine and fleshed out, the dynamics/feelings between them seem realistic. The worldbuilding is also quite detailed and the video game elements give it a nice spin opposed to a regular apocalypse novel. The writing is decent and stays consistent throughout the chapters I've read, slight improvements have been noted but there's still some grammar mistakes here and there but one easily reads past those, it's not annoying enough for me to call it a flaw. And I'm sure that the Author over the time of writing this novel will slowly improve his style. All in all I love the novel so far and have enjoyed every minute of reading it, keep on trucking Author and I hope this gets the attention it deserves. ** if you're in need of reviews maybe swap some with other writers on the Webnovel forums, that could also give you an insight into what other writers think could improve or what you do really well. Thanks for writing Author! (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )
Wow, this story really grabs my attention along with the personalities ofnthe characters and their design. Im very interested in seeing where this going. You have my full suppot shadows finger!!
Everything is nice but it is very hard to keep up with things. Like one moment she's doing something but in the next, she's doing something else. The arc with him being Cyra is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper boring in my opinion. I read this because of the non-human stuff but then it makes the mc into a human and barely goes back to his original body.
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Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason.Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end.The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality.I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything.Author, I want to kill you.
Good story very nice to read and happily enjoy it with the different pacing of events
MAPS BROTHER MAPS. Put a few maps in the description. We need maps in kingdom building novels. Even though it is the civil enengineer in me speaking.
A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really?
This is a story that the author spent months researching. Set in the Victorian era, the author strives to make it an epic masterpiece. Actual factual tidbits from the real world are weaved into this steampunk world.There is rich world building with characters and their personalities fleshed out perfectly. However... Maybe it's best not to get too tied to the characters...The development of the mystical elements are very well planned, with 220 classes. Imagine the richness that will bring!Many things are foreshadowed in this story, so look out for that!As translator, I will try to make sure the release rates are high.