网恋女友竟是九天神凰 the raw
Can it cure Twitter Cancer, though? Or Reddit, or better yet, 4Chan ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Omggggggg???I really love this novel????Please don't stop updating?I love how they communicate?????Really, Really love it???????
hey there. I'm not sure if it's just the first chapters, the translation or whatsoever but the amount of gold is driving me crazy. he started with a certain amount but despite that he keeps spending a luxury amount even not having much revenue. It's really frustrating the math doesn't match lol ? also this system is too unrealistic, I mean, you should at least set a certain amount of rules how stuff works and not poping up out of blue. nevertheless, Im enjoying the development, I'm used to skipping a lot of paragraphs in novels because of fillers and how authors often keeps slowly explaining and repeating and keeping the reader busy just to make some chapters. Wich is common and I don't blame bc I'd definitely do the same but it sucks nonetheless. anyway, your writing skills are clean and fine without regressive thoughts and it's really cool read such a novel despite the stuff I said.
Very good novel, not the greatest translation still reasonable. However very let down with Azrael being Azzy/Rael half the time also hate the romance with him and Claire. Honestly think its better to kill her off because the entire thing is trash even getting together was stupid.
as of chapter 40 the story and powers are great. the horror parts are engaging. im just worried that the mc will be too OP on later chapters. the side characters are fleshed out.
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MC is too passive, OC as romance, MC transforming into a woman all these things make you lose the motivation to keep reading (Because you already can see what will happen and it's not good)
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Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo releiInglés It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread