The writing itself is top notch. Most of the rest is a bit early to tell, but I can say one thing. The writing is solid. I would just go through and put some spaces between paragraphs for ease of reading. Otherwise a fantastic start.Try it! it just might be your cup of tea.
I absolutely love this story. I would love to see more posted. Keep up the great work!Honestly, I loved the setting, the way it mixed in DOG elements so week. While reading this, it made me feel like playing Disgaea and train a succubus. It's been too long since I enjoyed a story this much. The characters themselves have great personality.
Not to toot my own horn too much, but I think this novel I've written is very good at making characters feel real... The ironic twinges of humor about their own situations is something that lots of people do, humor and tragedy are the same... The inky difference is timing and tone. It's also very morally grey, but not the kind a lot of people are used to in fiction.
the japanese novel one is in real-world, if im not wrong its called "curing incurable disease with semen(dropped?)
I am not liking it. one the MC acts like he can survive anything when caught by law enforcers and blatantly tries to help them after thier mistreatment. I don't want him to oppose them but keeping his distance would be logical in such a situation. second he could have said he was the one who created the chip which would let him off the hook but he didn't even though he knew that Qin guy would have reported his name already.
An underwhelming novel where the cheat is more interesting than anything that actually happens in the story. Decent translation quality but incredibly poor world building. This has potential but I'm 19 chapters in and all that's happened is "he got stronger and one frustratingly uninteresting event is happening".Like I don't need 10 chapters about how he cultivates bro you can just summarise that up in 2 sentences so I can get to the part where things happen I really don't care about how much his bones hurt you don't gotta take me step by step through his process you can summarise it. 2.5/5
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Overall synopsis is good but the system mc gets is broken so no levelling, no exp form killing monsters and no quests but give it a try mc can get female heroines.
All hail our lord and saviour Scrappy! This is the book of his becoming, so it is the best! It deserves 6 stars, but for some reason webnovel won’t let me give it what it deserves.
seems like a good book so far enjoyable well written and stable updates for now with lots of potential have not seen any kingdom building elements yet for the tag to be there but their is a lot of potential for this novel also MC does not seem so OP right now hopefully it stays that way as i find very op characters a bit of a turn off. good book so far lots of potential looking forward to seeing how it develops.
False summary, just a hoax from the writer. A trivial novel, a hero, friends, a skirt girl, a trivial novel like the rest of the novel .hjkllllllkkkkkkkkkkkk
well the theme is overused but the unique is stacking hp and i guess there is one that stacking def out there but the more hp is the more the suffering is