Author here! I like these reincarnation(ish) VRMMO novels as a sort of guilty pleasure, but the main ones are getting stale. Soooooooo, I decided just to casually write on myself. This won't be some godly thing that brings some all new ideas to the table, but I'll try not to make it shtty.Give it a shot! Maybe you'll like it :]
I hope the english translation is good to easily understand the story. There are grammatical errors and the way to correct the grammar is that we have to rewrite the sentence or the while paragraph.
The author has clearly put forth a lot of effort into producing the best novel he could for his readers. Personally, I have seen the author reach out for advice on how to get better on the forums. This shows a dedication that deserves a good review regardless of how you feel about the novel itself.
Before anything, i just want to say that this novel is, as TheLordOfOrcs said, surprisingly well written.With that out of the way, i want to say that i just found this novel by accident, and man, it was a fortunate accident.I came with little to no expectations but i found myself reading all of it , even though the supernatural, which was the main thing i came for, has yet to appear in the book.I can't say that you will surely like it, but you can give it a try.
Please come back your story has so much potential. My curiosity is burning what happen next
Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library. ?
It was interesting and it was also my first time seeing this kind of webnovel. I mean, I did read first POV webnovels before, but not webnovels stating whose POV is being done like this one.The chapters are also short. So, the story feels like it's moving fast, even though the pace is actually slow.Sadly, the chapters are still short.
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
OMG this story is amazingly good, I can't wait for the continuation! It's been an amazing read so far, I haven't been able to put it down since I started reading it, I can't wait for the next update!
My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 7.95millionRating : 8.7(427)Chapters : 450+Status : completed Word count : 1.13million author level : lv5 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 69561Year started : 2017Chinese title : 低维游戏
It is a decent read. Cute and lethal. The updating isn’t often and the writing itself shows that the author is new to writing but still worth reading.