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All right this novel great writing quality. You have good updates everyday and good world background that with some mystery insides. It has good romance, story. Butbutbutbuuuuttttt.... It has worse power level development. Power level barrier. And whacky power level of MC  soooooo whacky and absurd that make it nonsense and i think i will drop this novel... Seriously how can such absurd mc still alive after all that thing happen. This novel has no sense power level on mc believe me if you want good story you can pick this. but if you do just dont think of the mc strength because this ****ty brat mc it has no sense of power level and he is so weak and pathetic to the point it absurd.

Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library. ?

This is an unique plotline, and the story is amazing. I don't see much problems with the grammar, and I suppose it needs a bit of proofreading. Other than that, it's a great work!

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They were 'Shen Duan Yu Han Fang' and 'Sun Yun'. After a dangerous battle with the 'Sky Demon Tiger' which was defeated with great difficulty they were exhausted. So they had to rest here.