Very interesting. I?can see why this has reached second place in the writing promt of 144. The characters and their interactions are a smooth read and you feel they are real. The world building is good and makes me want to find out more. But most importantly, what an interesting premise!
i did not like the start, i even stopped reading @ some point but i came due to the constant update and i am glad i did. this story is unfolding nicely. it reminds me of the 7 Keys, a book i read. i like this book, keep it up. love from Japan
I came here because it has the same author of Fate of Asertia and I never thought that i'd get hooked by this one as well. A totally different story and it's so refreshing. The comedy the action and the characters of this story are very much like a high schooler would do. I almost forgot that this is a revenge story and I kinda couldn't wait to see more of it.
The ending of this book is force A F. Was hoping for more progression, not a single chapter saying basically "They lived happily ever after" trope. Foreshadowing in earlier chapter never materialized, so damn frustrated.
This is a mess . A BEAUTIFUL mess ! i have a lot of Fun reading this as the writer make things very interesting. This is a fun twist on the genre and is very entertaining.
