Alleyster and the Entity of Conqueror

I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.

Not bad but also not good.            

My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.

I had high expectations, but honestly i am dissapointed by his hero complex and frustrated by the cliche villians. I wish you the best, amma peace out.

Somewhat good story but utterly atrocious and unreadable grammar and spelling

"Laura... are you okay?" Kenneth asked once we were far away from the castle. I held my breath holding back my tears.