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This Story will be in Hiatus because of various reasons;

1st I don't think I can make this story as good as I would want it to be (At least for now…) I want to write another story so I can have more experience and make this Fanfiction a funny and interesting one.

I always liked to read and watch [Dragon ball], I don't think is perfect but it is really funny and enjoyable so much that is one of my favorite series, so I think that it would be a waste to make a bad story with the Interesting things that can be made with the combination of [Dragon ball] and [Wuxia].

2nd I messed up a lot of things; release dates, story, etc. [Is my first time trying to write…]

3rd Stupid personal reasons…

I will rewrite this Story in the future…

I will start making a new story and have a few chapters done so that I can at least don't make the same mistakes again…. Well that's all… Thanks for the attention… -_-||

Yìzhì Xiaolóng is a young and promising cultivator

Unfortunately for him, he was send to the battlefield as cannon fodder, surviving with sheer will and luck battle after battle. Until he arrives to the most awkward battlefield in weeks since the beginning of the war, the two sons of the most powerful person in each sect face to face, an unavoidable battle happens.

After a long battle with the two heirs about to kill each other, the heads of the clans unable to bear with this interfere with the battle saving theirs sons but starting the final battle earlier than expected.

Yìzhì at the verge of collapse could only see everyone running for their lives, pushing him to the ground and afterwards being trampled to half-dead, thinking that the last moments he would see was the glorious battle of powerhouses, he didn't felt any other regret than not being one of those powerhouses.

!!! Watch our protagonist take on the [Dragon ball] Universe with the most cliché reason there is ¡¡¡[Is in Hiatus… So that will be after I rewrite it…]

Spoiler: Spoiler (Isn't this chicle reincarnation?)(Who cares is just for fun anyways!)(500 words on a description thought)(Wuxia on dragon ball well~ let's see how this gets.)(I just hope is readable XD)(My first language is not English so bear with me!!!)(This story uses some content of Dragon ball, Martial World, some Magus Type stories and very little of Naruto.) Credits to [richard052] for the picture!

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this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................
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The title... it just speaks to me.                                                                                                         
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Story's really good ,dropped it because of Ranzy character ...might pick up later
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There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there.Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself.I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time.*For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog.There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you.Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use.This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.
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I hope the english translation is good to easily understand the story. There are grammatical errors and the way to correct the grammar is that we have to rewrite the sentence or the while paragraph.
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Well, he didn't care. Some people survived in this world by learning not to poke their heads in where they shouldn't.
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