Hello and an honest review from me. There are some minor mistakes I found like the supposed to be one paragraphs sentences were separated into a new one which makes the construct of the paragraphs a bit sloppy although your writing is neat with low grammar mistakes so keep up the good work, author??
Though i have never tried BL before, I loved your writing style.Plot is interesting.Specially in first chapter.Those descriptions are deep.And with good amount of humour, I can see great success for this novel.But honestly I don't know if BL genera could go up on webnovel.
so far i've really enjoyed this webnovel, in my opinion it's on the same level as the reverend insanity, i'm just saddened by the slow release speed of the chapters
Although I don't have many word to say I'll just say it's good from what I experience in reading this story ??????????????????????
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Haha good luck, this will either be dropped or not finished for years. I saw the raw Idk how long ago and it's only around 200 chapters or a bit more.
I like the story very much. It's just a shame that this novel with a different title in another app were suddenly removed. It would be much appreciated if you could update the chapters very quickly. Kudos to the author.
This is seriously messed up.
I deeply enjoyed this book. please endeavor to read it
The book is a pet book with a card game( I only know magic and it’s kinda like it). The MC is half human/ alien, the alien is where the summons come from so he is half summon beast/ summoner. This is a light hearted comedy type, not overly so but enough. His grandpa wants him to marry but he is picking out the alien type like a shrimp princess. 1 is straw man that has many neg & pos, 2 is a kangaroo. He also gets beast skills. It’s fun.
Writing Quality:3/5 Barely passable.Stability of Updates:4/5 Good Enough.Story Development:1/5 Too much inconsistency that I can't even say anything about it just that read the comments on some chapters and you will see the amount of stupidity in this story goes.Character Design:1/5 Does this guy have a split personality? or just retarded? He will act like a kid to that slightly offended him the Xia but when it comes to Jasmine who tries to murder him he will just lick her shoes off like a retard, I mean just a few seconds ago she tried to murder him only for him to tell all about his secrets I mean who the f*ck does that..World Background:2/5 meh.
Its got all the ticks and tacks one looks for. Its got at least one or two chapters a day, with the author randomly going screw it and releasing 10 chapters in 15 minutes. Its got a truly fantastic story, unique with plenty of fun pieces. Its got a little NSFW but its never really the main point of the book and is less explicit than other books, a nice change. Finally the character development is very nice, with each character feeling unique enough to be able to not have to even know their names you can recognise them by their actions, while also still putting the focus on our main character. Long story short; its good you should try it!