Very bad story.Pros :1. Kingdom building novel.2. Good translation.3. Based on Mount and Blade which i like.Cons:1. Way to much wordpadding for make chapters bigger. They repeat the same thing like 5 times in one chapter and 3 times in the next just in case reader forgets it.2. All the villagers in the territory are male and don't have a single name (atleast up to where I read). They seem to have emotions and talk, but for fks sake they might as well not. No names, no personality, only obeying orders.3. MC got the memory of a goldfish. He worries about problems when the solution was something he got as a reward from a side quest just one day ago. Or maybe it was because the author made the mc forgot so he could add filler text to the novel. Such as all the way the mc COULD HAVE solved the problem if he DIDN'T HAVE the system.4. There was one whole chapter which was just an essay about date palm trees.TLDR; Trash novel. Hope it won't get selected.
Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen. Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine. Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!
Finally! Something new and different from all the junk in pilot read! Hopefully, it's not something misleading! Let's just appreciate this entry for finally freeing us from the clutches of the same boring and overused ideas.
i like the story so far. its been years and there is no update. can anyone tell me where can i find the raw and whats its alternate title. i coulnt find it in google. sad :(
I just hope it stays true to its slice of life tag ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
When will there be more chapters???????? This story is turning into something great. WHY ISNT THERE ANY CHAPter update sinceover a month???? UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS ???
This book starts out pretty well but , just as as mc starts to become strong it finishes like the author is riding in a vehicle with no driver and is about to go off a cliff .
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read until chapter 120not worth the coins.after the first 2 reincarnations it just went down. contradicting statements , author forgets what it wrote. just bad.little or 0 world background, 0 power lvl insight. everything is very general and ... just unfortunately very difficult to put it into words how disappointed i am in a novel that had a interesting concept.rather go red "(the) Devils cage" a bit similar but much better. although the ending is a bit rushed and bad, the stuff before that is quite good
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I just enjoy modern day wish fulfillment with a plot novels. Particular since the outcomes are plausible irl. Anything about business or money which involves a system etc i just love.
Well, another fantastic story. I could not put it down. I love the layout of the chapters giving a glance at each couple. I can't wait to read the sequel.