Interesting read, I quite enjoyed it..................................................................................................................................
Ok I am now giving up on this one. It had decent world building at start so I wanted to keep going but the mc has gone full template raging ahole so it’s not worth it anymore.
Writing quality is poor, there are a lot of gramatical errors which make it so the reader has to read things multiple times to know what is going on, the overal story idea and story progression is not bad though. If the author could fix their writing of the english language then it would get a much higher rating.
th complain I have is related to the mc he is very arrogant in situations that could be resolved peacefully like in the end of ch 25 and ch 26 when he was asked about who he is and he didn’t respond he just escalated the problem further and prolonged it instead but i see the mc as a baby who got a new toy and got addictedto it as for those who see this novel as brother and sister love, let me tell you that it's not , they are not his actual sisters they are from different families, so read first before commenting mindlessly .
First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!
Writing review as of chapter 462. Decent novel better than the majority in this app but plagued with pacing issues. Story premise is interesting with higher dimensions and historical rifts. However, dimensions basically just become power levels and not much variety with rifts(would explain but don’t want to give spoilers). Author sets up for large character development by making the MC infuriatingly naive. Love story just feels forced so isn’t impactful but more like filler. Pacing becomes an issue with explanations taking majority of a chapter often with rhetorical questions that could be answered within actual story elements allowing reader to make conclusions instead of treating them like children who need everything explained. Action is good and character development is well done but as stated before character starts almost drop worthy. Will continue to read
Well, I don’t like to criticise this novel much especially about it’s background characters and it’s world but you know it’s protagonist is plain too plain that it’s hard to find any semblance that he’s human. He’s like a robot with hardly any emotions and please stop with that indifferent and calm composure all the time because it’s kinda rigid how he act and socialize with others. Especially we do not want to read 1000s of chapters in rigid way..?✌?✌?
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Very confusing book!