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A very interesting tale from the perspective of an actual NPC that goes and fights against the players and the insane madness that players are committing very well done and very impressed.
Calling your main character "Chadero" should triggert some sort of mechanism that forces reviewers to select 1 / 5 stars.Seriously this so bad :(
My overall opinion so far is that the story seems interesting and has a different approach on the isekai genre. The approach taken is generally unique and I like the way the characters are brought in. As it's rare for me to leave reviews, I'll keep this saved and leave more of an opinion down the road. For now I think the writing is good and the world development is good, and overall it's going in a good direction! looking forward to more down the road Author!!
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The way you started with your story is quite interesting - it makes people want to keep reading to see what happens next. This is a good romance book! Keep up the good work Author!
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Rocky's story is interesting to discover and each of his thoughts has a genuine feeling of reality behind it. The writing can be a bit better, but the plot and storyline are engaging. Every character is intriguing and the author has done a great job in showing their personality through well-written dialogues. Overall, nice job!
0-0 Listen to me......this novel is too good. >< Bro this novel makes you want to spend fast pass or coins. -_- Other novels make me sometimes yawn or go on other apps while I'm reading. This novel is was so good that I wasted more than one hundred fast passes and create 5 more accounts to get 15 faster passes daily. WHYYYYY DID THE AUTHOR MAKE THIS A PREMIUM NOVEL> I hate/love the author. Also, the author should post the original photo of the MC. Also, the author shouldn't make this a harem novel. I don't want to see the pure, innocent, naive child be a Casanova. (0)_(0)
This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.
Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway.Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel.After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me. I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was. After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom. I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside.Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.
Spare yourself some time and brain cells and stop reading this. The summary is completely useless, don't even bother listening to it. MC is nerfed for absolutely no reason in the 2nd chapter. The author couldn't come up with a better reason to nerf him so he didn't even explain it. Just: MC can't touch his equipment because electricity, hurr durr durr.I say that Webnovel doesn't waste these poor translators' time and mental health by making them work on stupid novels like this.
O cru "我能复制天赋".Minha tela de pesquisa fica branca quando faço pesquisa em chinês.............................................................
