Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith
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Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.

His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.

In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.

A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.

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Broken VR Game (the balance, programming, and hardware are all poorly done) + unnecessary (RE:) Time Travel. Then he jumps back into the machine that killed him. I've heard "The MC's actions were unrealistic" before, but I'm not going to read about the multi-Darwin-Award winner. The only reason I flipped through the first few chapters, was that I thought it was Portal Fiction. It's not.
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Still begining of the story, but from the background story i know it will be interesting.

But, i think it is still too many chapter just for the intro. but it is still interesting.........
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I hope all of you enjoy this read, if you do feel free to leave a review and maybe even support it by adding the novel to your library and voting with power stones. If you see any mistakes or repetitions anywhere, feel free to point them out in the comments for that chapter.
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An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience. A smidge concerned about the state of the MC and his life, both past and rebirth, but that is hopefully just due to a lack of current exposition detailing it at this stage of the writing. Overall this novel has gotten me intrigued and I am looking forward to watching as it grows.
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I like the person's background and the character. I think this has a lot of potential! Good start, may the writing Gods bless you with motivation and creativity to continue! I'm still starting a lot of writing projects like this, get excited and then lose it after the first few chapters, so I hope you have a better time than I do!
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I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.

Moving on to technical issues,
I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.
I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?
All the best!
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