Mark_Johnson_5373
This book reads like it was written by a 12 year old, whose first language isn’t English. The characters are cliche and unrealistic. The grammar errors, spelling mistakes and multiple references to Heath as “Heather”, drove me nuts. I can’t read anymore of this trash. Don’t waste your time or money
I don't understand why people in the comments are so disgusted by the yaoi tag.
It's just weird because you don't see us commenting on your harem/hentai novels like "the summary was good but it's straight romance so i won't read it."
???
D*mn its good
So good I went ahead and subscribed patreon cuz i couldn’t wait
Did you give it a try? Should I read it?
What is it like? Is that book incomplete, still being updated, or is it finished? I left this novel in chapter 600 or thereabouts, and I'd really like to know if the story continues or is it abandoned, or at least the name of the second book
Another like that would be witch hunter system
The story isn't for you then. Thanks for picking it up it a shame you couldn't get into it. I was like you once it literally took me three tries before I got hooked on the novel you should try again at a later date the novel is good that I promise you.
Hope for a sequal for this.
this mark up the artistic way of thinking
The story is chill but MC is not very likeable....Also the interactions with the girls are cringe. I mean the story writing feels childish and lacking depth overall. The overall concept is great and if it was written better it would be a solid story.
This is a great book. If you love this genre then you should check this out. Am engrossed and I know I'll be done in no time so hoping the author will update more chapters.
Great story, my only issue is that the author seems to be pushing himself to create a suspense filled story instead of relaxing and taking it slow. I hope this gets continued.
