It's getting boring... he became attention seeker too fast. It's just goblin, orc and werewolf but he's becoming so big in an awkward way. It actually fills fillers and made the me bored. I thought it will end soon and the story will continue but it's dragging it too long. I eventually even think that the translator is better than the author seeing the translator fixing the words of the author in a better way. and I personally hate Yu- sae jung how come a bad personality like her takes more role in the story than hard working people like yu rin, eun jin(?) was it? I think the author hate hard working people sometimes. At the start I the story was gold but then eventually went to a turn of unwatchable nonsense dragging story. A lone guy like him want to get attention? right away? living alone for a long time doesn't mean they can like/handle big attention. The comfort of being alone shouldn't be peeled of easily. And seriously again, how does smiting and alchemist from a mere basic monster....skill and knowledge are overwhelming the society even if good alchemist are what extinct?. sigh after reading "Everyone else is a returnee" which gave the satisfaction of "working hard" and "Tutorial is too hard" which gave the satisfaction of "survival,emotion and psychological" this feels so empty.
An amazing read! I enjoyed checking out this novel, had a wild time reading this, do continue author!
I just finished volume 1 and there hasn’t been any mention of necromancy. Given that it is in the title, I feel like it is false advertising. At best, the pacing and development is very slow.
I just want to say that the way you wrote your story is absolutely mesmerizing. I find myself getting dragged upon by the waves that are your writing. Please keep up the good work!
Finally a cultivation story that also tells from the lead heroine perspective, rather than just there as vases. The MC is a fallen god but he didnt know about it.
i will tell the good and the bad thing about this fic.the good :+ premise story and plot development is interesting.+ mc is cool and reasonable, not cocky, not perverted, his sole goal so far is to protect his siblings. + Issei undergone traumatic event's so he mature early not indulging his perverted hobby instead he become protective to his family and trying his best to grow stronger to reach that goalthe bad :-way too many unnecessary OCs. issei sister, asia brother, loki and the gang. they become more important than canon characters. is there a point to read DxD fanfic if the main story is filled with non-DxD characters? you decide, but i personally rather read original novel instead if there is too many OCs-mc is your perfect human, your gary stu, this kind of character is the worst character because such human is not possible. human is human because they are flawed or have vice, otherwise they just fairy tale angel. the story still early so maybe he have flaw or vice in the future. - Grammar is awful. pronoun is all wrong. the fic often use "he" pronoun for female characters or vice versa. the fic use "brother" for female character or vice versa. the fic use "hyoudou brother" for referring issei and his sister. it's quite clear that the author just use google translate and wont bother to proofread it. for author : use "hyoudou sibling" next timei think this fic have potential but the awful translation makes it unreadable. and the so many OCs fill the story to the point shifting out Canon characters is making me dont care about the story anymore. it's tough to read
This is actually really interesting, i want to read more of it to know more about the story and characters. The first few chapters are really good, totally recommend for those who like these type of novels.
it great I love it cuz of the astonishing characters and most importantly it has good quality English and has sense of reasoning and a good ending good beginning no mistakes if you read it you will know you're reading a novel something written by someone intelligent not just anybody just a great number and inspirational novel it has all the things you are looking for a interpreting support things done and the boy is a good boy
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Such a great story author , the blurb of your story is interesting, I love how your writing .The story is enchanting and so cool at the same time , keep it up author and great work. ?
Wow. The story revolves around six couples! That’s amazing! ? It’s hard to keep up the story if there are many characters but you managed it. ?? For the writing, it’s a little bit confusing at first but overall, it has a good plot. ? Keep it up, author!
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