So far the plot and pace are pretty good, I hope the story isn't rushed like in the old novel. If possible, make the MC's relationship with the current woman deeper first, before bringing up a new harem member.
After reading 79 chapters, I found the story mostly annoying and frustrating before I had to just put it down. Do you like a main character that leaves loot on the ground and refuses to look out for himself because he expects the author to hand him what he needs when he needs it? Do you like a main character who refuses to bathe or wear anything but blood covered rags because he prefers to look and smell like swine? do you like main characters that get good weapons handed to them but refuse to use them and just punch everything? Do you like a main character that shows all his enemies his secrets, but will irrationally keep secrets only when it hurts his own opportunities just because. Do you like an MC whose "cultivation" is only described as visualizing a demon head? Not a joke. That's it. I don't. I feel personally insulted. Er Gen has put in minimal effort on this one. I think maybe Er Gen fed an AI a bunch of cultivation novels, and this is the novel it vomited out.
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all I can is.. if you don't like an MC that has a one track brain cell then don't bother. This is one is a full copy paste cliché with an MC thats got a serious fetish for standing and receiving a beating and the enemies all don't have brain cells. They only live to give away free material, and increase MCs strength. or rather he's defense so he can receive more beatings .
I realy like this novel, and I fell like this should have more recognition, can't wait for him to accept himself even irl ?
Please author don't drop this in the future!
Man really ? Instead of amazing stories like Heretic apothecary genius or Notebook of fortune, we get this ? Maybe I am being unfair , but still.....
A book not to miss, This has a very amazing storyline and a world full of possibilities and probabilities, you can’t just predict what is going to happen after reading it. The most amazing thing is the MC background, I can guess but at the same time I am still clueless as actually who MCs parent are and what kind of background he has and on top of it the comedic splashes in the book make it just more enjoyable, if that was even possible , The author has a flare for writing rarely seen and am sure if not dropped he will bring this book to an amazing conclusion
Tag List:Urban Fantasy, Action, Grim Reapers, Magic, Grimoire, Ghosts, Dead Souls, Demons, Spirits, Sages, Demi-humans, Hell, Different Realms, Major 1st person POV, MC with judgemental mentality and short temper, Gradual escalation of strength / Power, Non-system/cultivation magic mechanism.Romance = There is slight romance but it's not a major focus. It's barely hinted at in the initial 3 arcs and even after that, it's a very gradual sort of thing.Plot Pace = Not going to lie, it is a slow paced story but if you stick with it, I'm sire you'll have fun the whole time. I do add in humour and world exposition and character work to make that slow pace intresting.This is a planned story. While not every event is planned out, for now the plan is to have 10 arcs, each with around 30-40 chapters (40-50k words per arc). The first two arcs will be set in the real world but after that, the story will take place in other realms.Please like this review so that others can see the tags! Thank you ^_^
I will give 5 for the writing quality and no shit in this novel like beta MC and other stuff.The story has a great start, good plot and interesting characters. I like kingdom building and cultivation novels, the story has good Phase. keep it up author ?
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