The Perks of Being Stuck in the Middle

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MC terlalu idiot, tidak sesusai caracter. Cerita bukan Tag Villain tetapi lebih ke Tag Anti-Pahlawan. Ngga ada kesadaran diri, padahal udah tau keadaan masa depan tetapi tidak dimanfaatkan. Pengalaman MC prolog berhasil membunuh raja binatang abadi harusnya ada pengalaman selama itu tetapi di cerita MC terlalu idioit seakan tidak ada pengalaman sama sekali

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As of the first chapter, the plot and storyline is good. A few grammatical errors here and there but that doesn't bother much. I'd like to see how this story progresses. Keep writing!

Great novel but my only complaint is the short chapters. I mean at the very least write 1000-1200 words per chapter.~ a guy from No romance and no harem gang