it great I love it cuz of the astonishing characters and most importantly it has good quality English and has sense of reasoning and a good ending good beginning no mistakes if you read it you will know you're reading a novel something written by someone intelligent not just anybody just a great number and inspirational novel it has all the things you are looking for a interpreting support things done and the boy is a good boy
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Great! The way it was written is just great. It's like riding a bus of questions. Be they words or characters. Be they events or the readers. All will search for answer. This book is quite similar to Moriarty the Patriot, I like it. Great job madame. Do keep on writing and updating~
Seems interesting. (140 words ughh...)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished.The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it.I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.
I've been reading FLBF since it was released and knowing that there's a sequel book right now, i'm so excited?? and i really love nan hua and long qian xing character in flbf one and cannot waitt to see their development in this book! even though in here their memories in flbf, they doesnt remember it and i'm very curios what happened to them, but i still love to read it separately? Thankyouu so much for sora to publish this wonderful story??
