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Too many bot reviews....0And even chapter 2 is bad....Too many bot reviews....?Too many bot reviews....+6Too many bot reviews....+9Too many bot reviews....+69
Would really like this book to continue as it was an awesome read! I have enjoyed the world that’s being built up so far and others who have read more of this only leave me wanting more based on their reviews.
Love it so far can’t Wait for more————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Honestly you can kinda take this review with a grain of salt because there are so few chapters I cant say anything about stability of updates or world background really, but honestly i'm hooked. The writing quality is really good and so far the characters, irl world, game, and npcs and everything are rly good and well written. The author has also dropped foreshadowing and honestly my imagination is running wild and I can't wait to read more. With only 9 chapters I can't guarantee the novel is good but so far its promising and its 100% worth it to at least try reading it.
One of the best novel. The story is good and nice background and character with step by step development in different way not same as other novel. TOO SAD only translator is not respond any more ( NP Just find more CH. in google) -__-'
Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect:The GoodThe story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal.Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent.Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel heheThe BadPacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work onNo romance...POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better.There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this tooAll in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
Chapter 1-200's story was really good for me, then started the school part which was quite boring (MC can't do astral travel because his ability is having problems). Then after half a year of MC at school, MC can use his abilities again. The second world of MC goes named D19, there is a kingdom named "Great Xia". And yes it is the world of martial arts with cultivation.
anyone found yet?.......................
This book is absolutely fantastic. I love the MC Eisen so much. This book will have you laughing, crying, and cursing the shyt out of the bad guys we come across in this story. The family dynamics is touching. It shows a man who had to give up his craft because of an accident. It shows a man given a second chance to spread his craft through a game. It shows a father who never gives up on his kids no matter the struggles they have or might go through. It shows a grandfather believing and encouraging his grandkids that they can be or do anything they set their heart on. It shows Eisen spreading his wisdom of life to his in game friends and encouraging them to live their best and most awesome life.
This story is one of my favorites, but this slow update speed is unbearable. Please please please give this a reasonable update rate or give it to someone else who will. If this had a 10 ch/week update rate it would probably easily make top 10 on qidian... it deserves more.
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