I give it 10/10 it has alot of spelling errors, but there is enough context to tell what it should be. but the story is amazing, I wish I was here when it first was written especially after I have read the next novel in the series twice now. so seeing the beginning is rather exciting. definitely worth the read and it's not terribly expensive maybe 3000 coins in total or something. do read if you enjoy the other novels. and if you havet read the other novels read this first to understand the background, or don't qnd come back after you have read it and enjoy all the references you missed.
Trash novel.Legit 4 chapters in and we have the usual xuanhuan "OBEDIENTLY HAND THE TREASURES OVER OR U WILL DIE" and weak MC is like "EXTRA POWER CAUSE HE OFFENDED ME" and he goes super saiyan and kills the guy.
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a very bad translation with change of name race and gender between sentence, more than that the author just give name to thing without introducing them. there is no World or cultivation systeme introduction within the first 20th chapter and you just need to know that the mc is the greatest genius of all time thanks to the systeme
translation becomes bad with each character
The narration in this book are good including the story and pace. I find some good use of words and i would really like to read the story further....
Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining.I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
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Such a different take on a world. This author normally writes about over powered heroes so it is nice to see a story about a hero starting at level one! Oh man the story is intense though! I feel so bad for the hero!
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