Winterfulday
invisible dragon kileld so many he didn't even kno who he killed
This review is only 7 chaptors in and this definitely has good potential. Keep up the good work Author-san
Very good read! Each chapter is made with great detail! I had a very easy time imagining what is going on. The system is also great feature added as well as the unique abilty of the MC. If you love seeing the MC getting stronger every chapter I would definitely recommend this book!
all in all, it looks like a well written book ngl! the author looks like he has standard knowledge of demonology which was one of the things I used to read on a lot back in the days. I think the book has potential to do good, maybe even the next hazbin hotel XD if it keeps the slice of life flow that the theme of the contest requires. can't wait to read more from the author, but I'll probably wait a bit and see how many chapters pile up. I'm not biggest fan of non Xianxia works but if something like this can grab my attention completely, then I'm sure a normal reader will eat this up completely.stop wasting time reading this and go read the book!
2 is a stretch to me. The direction of the story's quality saved it from being a 1. The grammar and writing quality butchered the novel. The novel had a good story with the laws and mc's character, but again the writing quality completely butchered the story. I am not expecting professional but it's worse than machine translations. You will need to reread and hope you understood it right to not be confused. (Some titles, names, and numbers are not consistent) and got switched which threw me off.Some facts are like copy and paste. Even more the novel was like random words to make the certain word count. The novel had potential but the writing quality discouraged me from continuing reading
Hello everyone, Author here.I want to thank those who have read my novel so far and special thanks to those who cheered me with power stones. I hope you all enjoy the story. Please continue to support the novel with power stones, reviews and don't forget to comment.I am going to gift myself a good rating, don't mind it. Have a nice read!!
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
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thanks for the effort author-san ??? moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee
This book was amazing truly the best book I have ever read some things need work like the spelling was off and words put in the wrong places but other than that this was a some and gave me a bit of a summary about the actual game???
starting to get good hope theres more chapters soon ....................................................................................…...………...
Story seems interesting based on the sypnosis and chapter titles, why did it get discontinued though? Low amount of readers? This books looks unique and I really started to like this based on the sypnosis and the uhh what do u call the chapters before chapter 1 again? Such a shame this got discontinued
