Everything was going well until chapter three, what the **** did you need it for? boy is this one of the worst novels i've ever seen, seriously, the whole land has only chinese, and he still says it would destroy other countries? What the ****?
This is a refreshing read about a sword cultivator. It starts when he returns home after adventuring for the last 6 years. The MC has morals and isn't like in some of the other novels where he is a completely shameless b*stard. It is another great novel by I eat Tomatoes.There are also hints of romance and it isn't some harem novel it is the story of two cultivators who grow closer together as they suffer through adversities together. All in all it is a great read.
Absolutely fantastic book! It has everything, cultivation, different worlds, an OP MC, interesting setting, a bit comedy, romance, good detailed fights and much more.The MC doesn't has a chat-like cultivation or absurd abilities, which would allow him to be the overlord everywhere. He only has his 'mad' training and his heaven defying talent (something has to make him the MC^^).The story doesn't seem to have so many different confusing realms, which MC will have to climb one after another and when he becomes the best of one realm there doesn't appear out of blue a new realm. The different worlds where quite soon introduced and it didn't change, yet^^.Of course the MC is absolute OP (but that is what we expect^^), but his power is ... coherent?^^ without too much of face slapping or wrong placed arrogance.The development of the story is understandable, makes sense and really enjoyable.An another point is the romance, there is no harem, but only one female 'MC', which isn't just a doll or just a side character. Of course the MC has much more screen time but it's still alright. By the way, a really good thing is that in this book the author breaks boring cliches about the heroine, which I really hated.There is much more to write about this book, but time and space is in this moment limited, so my advice is, just read it!
The system doesn't give him an edge. It gives him a get out of death free card. Due to this, there is no ******* in the story. We know that whenever there is trouble get another get out of death free card.
Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review. SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.) Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same. Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating. Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher. The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.
After a very long time, something worth reading has been translated and translated well. Sincerely appreciable effort by the author who has beautifully focused on characters and story instead of power-up. Hope this gets selected and the story continues to amaze me. Well done author. Well done translator.Keep it up.
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Need to read more but so far so good I don't mind reading this novel long term unless they suddenly drop it or the updates are not stable enough
I just wanna rate this if there was a problem with the story dont be shy to point it out this will be my very first Sect Novel, Thx for reading my novel
1. This is not harem course don hate harem I don't why 2. this novel does not have lots of mistakes in grammar 3. this novel has a promising future if don doesn't drop this Lastly, if I'm correct this novel would be publish in mega novel this page was just temporary
Got this recommendation from my friends. And I am impressed after reading this. The story narration is very good. No useless dragging the plot and every chapter is intense and really good. Adding it to library. Story got potential.
I love your writing style and the narration of the povs. There are few weird grammars but all in all it was good! I also love the way you describe the surroundings of the mc. Very descriptive and broad.