PedroSousaM1o
I like these kinds of novels since I m a huge fan of murder/mystery/horror novels and I believe that the author has similar taste in novels! This is one of those which I needed. Thank you author :)
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I’m rating it perfect because it’s about virtual reality games a good genre.??????.
Not the best novel I’ve read but among the current garbage that trial read has been lately this is better then a lot of the others though having a harem of what amounts to animals is still weird asf
I do not have the whole idea of the story but the game is so dumb. Who can ever play a game like this . This is really a bad one and I really do not like it. It's kind of exaggerated too
This story is relatively fast paced which a lot of people including myself like a lot. However, the lack of world building really gets to me. In any cultivation novel, or any novel with supernatural powers, there is a power system with somewhat clear rankings. For this novel though it seems the author comes up with new realms as they’re writing. The MC’s character is fine. Basically any generic Chinese cultivation novel mc who is ruthless and kills decisively. The biggest flaw, for me though is the horrendous world building and lack of clear cultivation ranks. I only read up to chapter 70 so maybe in the future chapters it got better, but that was my limit. The introduction of realms, without knowing how far it was from the MC’s current realm, was frustrating. If you like fast paced, fast food novels with a bunch of idiotic background characters, then this is for you. I would have actually enjoyed this novel if there was proper world building. Some times you just want to turn off your brain and read fast food novels.
Awesome Job... updates should be regular.but all in a general sense this a great read.Fun characters, Amazing World, Great transitions, fair growth of cultivation and a heck of a story line.
I like this kind of story where time travel and try to become better. i also like that not just the girl that smart that the guy also does similar think.
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Grammar has been checked. Story is about a girl who was kidnapped by a man trying to get revenge. If you like dark romances, then this is the book for you.
Some guyz mock me cause i give this novel daily review. Wtf it is not like i harm/damnify them. If u guys really want me stop give daily review. Make suggestion to who have thiss app. Dont make gibe exp for daily review. Some guyz mock me cause i give this novel daily review. Wtf it is not like i harm/damnify them. If u guys really want me stop give daily review. Make suggestion to who have thiss app. Dont make gibe exp for daily review. Some guyz mock me cause i give this novel daily review. Wtf it is not like i harm/damnify them. If u guys really want me stop give daily review. Make suggestion to who have thiss app. Dont make gibe exp for daily review.
ok as much as I like dumb and corny mcs this take it to the top, like the dude is buggy but 10 times dumber and cringy. to the point where reading this becomes uncomfortable and not enjoyably.this needs heavy rewriting where the unnecessary paragraphs and sentences needs to be ommited in my opinion.and if you move your story you will get more readers.
