This is so awesome and amazingIt's really makes me hook I'm actually in love with this novel Keep writing and updatingCan't wait for your new chapter
If you are interested in magic and fantasy, this story is for you! It has an interesting plot. It talks about luck. The writing improved with every chapter. Author, just polish your work a little, your novel will succeed!
Tried to follow till ch 20. I wish I can continue it further more.As a gun guy, i won't tell much about guns since its "fantasy"But my biggest problem lies at the cover. Seriously tho? E-sized girl's cover? and the story is counterproductive with the cover. like ????Fix it, consider rewriting your book from scratch.
very very pumped up and basically that quote in the title is not that far from right the eyes does not hold the most power in the body instead its in the top 5 without are eyes we see nothing without them we can accidently fall of a cliff or even trip hurting our self or even hitting a wall accidently
overall good novel, characters still need more depth, and fast updates (and harem XD)//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The plot is very very grippy and I enjoyed most of it. I would also advise you to run a grammar check before publishing it and that would just add to the look of it. I love how you designed your world and the detail in some aspects is almost like it's in front of us. Overall, solid job! ??
This is one of my favorite novels the concept is very good I can't wait for the story to develop more I am surprised it is not very popular I think there need to be a lot more people to read it that's right people write more reviews for this great novel bring it to the top.
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I absolutely adore this story. it's very entertaining. The only issues that I've come across for myself is how slow the story is developing, and how slow its being updated. However, writing takes time which is something I will continue to respect as I wait for the next installment.
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Dude, how is this an original novel. Its quality is way above that, equal to the top ranked Translated light novels. 140 characters — 140 characters — 140 characters
I have absolutely nothing to complain about on this novel. It snatched my interest as soon as I finished reading the first chapter. The content is edited to decency, the summary is solid but like any other I would see which is nice since its simple and understandable...and the cover is probably my favorite part???Because we don't often see novels that have a typical Indian background, this is a very unique book that traces more of reality. I'm excited to see how this novel will develop in the future so as per requested, I added it in my library!This character is more of my type; not too arrogant but slowly changes through growth of power and knowledge. Lives the normal reality feeling gulity and learns about the right and wrong. Fine job author! But there are many obstacles left to overcome the job of writing so good luck! ✔✔???