Question Author!I finished reading 3 of your novels (All of them are great and well written btw) and was wondering if you plan on creating a novel where the MC and ML flip flop like in Prince and hisFool, albeit briefly? So far it was only that book that you had the MC as the top and had Yi Chen open to being the bottom but Zi Han not following through in The Assassins Enemy Lover. I think it'll be interesting to say the least and spice up the story a bit, at least in my opinion but anyways if you see this let me know and keep up the great work!
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Ahhhhh, where do I even begin with this one? This story’s got potential—a real banger, easily top 50 on WebNovel. Grammar’s a bit shaky, but hey, it’s good enough that you don’t mind too much. But then… the author starts hittin’ you with clichés, and the MC? Man, he was this close to turnin’ into a full-on wimp. Glad he finally grew a pair and took out those bastards after they killed the servant woman, but that scene? Just one giant, nasty cliché. It’s no wonder the comments went radio silent after that chapter.This coulda been one of the greatest stories on here, but I think the author’s got it twisted. Just ‘cause the MC starts out as a servant doesn’t mean he needs some grand tragedy to justify becoming a villain. Hate to break it to ya, but this guy? He’s no villain. Not even an anti-hero. Dude watches the woman who raised him get forced to stab herself just ‘cause someone ordered it, and what’s he do? Flashes some “killing intent” and just stands there. Like, buddy, you just got her killed. Could’ve seen it coming a mile away—these people tried to pull something shady just a day before, and he’s still clueless. And then he goes on to snag the top spot in the academy did he think they were gonna congratulate him? Makes no sense.I’ll say it again: even the lowliest servants back in the day knew when to break a rule, throw a punch, stand up for somethin’. Sure, some got killed for it, but at least they went out with their heads held high. They didn’t just stand around lookin’ dumb while people they cared about got hurt. It’s time the author dials down on the “tragic backstory” nonsense and gives us an MC who’s got a bit more grit, ‘cause right now, he’s fallin’ flat. If the Mc story is rewritten, take out a the one big cliche, and think of a creative way for him to gain enemies or become the villain you desire, story is easily up there for one of the top reads….good luck to the author
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I love this novel. The writing quality is not very good at times but I still love it. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
I am writing this review after reading the first chapter, and boy, this is so interesting. This book is a gem. I will read the story further from now on until I catch up to the author and will give my honest feedback as I go.The parts "are you a person stuck in a monster's body" and the "Rip? Not eat?" This does remind me of 'Chainsaw Man', which is so addicting to read.
Writing Quality 5Stability of Updating 5Story Development 5 Character Design 5World background 5Fantastic = action, romance, and drama, give them 100/100 each
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Overall this is a pretty interesting story to read. We have the main character who is indeed the laziest person you will probably meet. He is too lazy to ask extra questions that would probably save him a bit of time, but it wouldnt be much because he is so OP. Maybe that was his strategy all along because he seems to power through situations. Not much has happened so far but the writing is good enough that the story does not feel slow paced or filled with meaningless stuff to me. The side characters are all really interesting and hold their own place in the back of your mind. I hope this series continues and that the shameless author understands quality reviews will come out if you don't threaten the readers.
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The set pace of the story and immersion is good, and the story concept is certainly not the mainstream and unique thus attracting readers right in. The only problem which I seem to find is the abrupt shift in the first-person and third-person narrative but that could be just my opinion may be fair to others. Keep it up Author, never stop dreaming.