The translation is kinda out of place and needs to be like polished which doesnt look that hard and i hope they do fix the translation. not a bad story.
Generic and lacking character. Two advantages of game novels are the option for creative world design and the option to have characters fail or die with limited consequences. Instead we got a generic fantasy world where his "talent" (a system that would never work IRL due to the imbalance caused) removes any sense of tension by giving him a ridiculous equipment, levelling and skill advantage over any other player. It's really cringy to have the MC called a "great god" for winning a lottery and the antagonists obviously went to How to be an Arrogant Young Master 101. At least in the first 30 chapters, MC has no real character of note (no relationships, quirks, personality), instead just following the rather dull plot line no questions asked. Overall, story is readable but very generic.
yeah I did what you said right now and now review time this novel is really great for beginners and for people that read alot but to criticize to much because some people have said it's a bunch of cliches but if you add different cliches together you might just a really good book like how right now nova has a mysterious family and all he knows is he's related to the first king and he wants to get stronger to help reishnied (sorry if i got it wrong i did it off memory ) and help himself with other things don't know yet but we're going to see
I am a bit late but this story is pretty amazing. Keep up the greag work author! I plan to continue reading after more chapters!
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