ok as much as I like dumb and corny mcs this take it to the top, like the dude is buggy but 10 times dumber and cringy. to the point where reading this becomes uncomfortable and not enjoyably.this needs heavy rewriting where the unnecessary paragraphs and sentences needs to be ommited in my opinion.and if you move your story you will get more readers.
"That's right," Kisuke said with a grin. "However, that badge of yours allows the Soul Society to constantly track and control the Reiatsu of whoever is in possession of a combat pass," Kisuke said surprising Ichigo.
Not even I was like this, maybe the human king would have some maids like that but out of him, I can't think of anyone if is really the human king he will want to kill a crossbred like me.
Inviting a man to bed, undressing, exposing her cumming face, saying such a thing with upturned eyes, what in the world would happen, there's no way this intelligent girl doesn't know
'Hey you!' all the students look at the owner of the call and it was the security student council, Yamada, 16 years old, second year of higschool, Brown hair with dark-ish brown eyes, standard height with avarage weight, One of the top students of the school.
