One of the novel that i thought not worthy,
but it changes after i read 3chapter as it make me more interest about what will happen
Me encata la serie
Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading
I like the premise of Save State. It gives room for a lot of experimenting with different Timelines. I have only read two chapters so far but I do enjoy the concept.
Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.
Sage, what a catchy name for a protagonist.
Anyway, what a glorious origin. Tragedy strikes, and now the protagonist must struggle to survive. What a great concept.
This is an amazing novel. I recommend it.
Oh yes daddy, pump me full with those chappies!! Yes!! Yes!!! We are melting away! Harder do it and don't stop!!! Arghhh, has gosh! You Bad Daddy!!!
This novel is well written, catches you right from the start, and makes you wonder what will happen next. I would say author writes lots of details and explanation to help you understand the situation.
Love that it is about Alexander The Great!
Only suggestion is too much information at the start may turn readers off.
BUT!
I suggest you give it a read! It is entertaining and fun.
Such a fun story! A big thank you to the author!
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