I Want More Chapters! PleaSe!
The story is great I want more chapters. There are so many beautiful things about the story and I wish for it to continue thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Decent read, probably the best of this batch. I'd ignore the title, it's a joke. This is a simulation system novel but unlike most of the other ones this one feels a lot less monotonous, the system also doesn't feel as random.
For example there are 5 fixed types of rewards the MC can get from simulating and the rewards actually make a lot of sense so it's definitely better thought out than most of them.
This novel also does have it's absurd and actually humorous moments like the gigolo talent, the fact that he can simulate the same simulation multiple times to stack rewards, the absurd thought process of our protagonist etc. This really does add a lot of charm to the novel and I think it'd be lifeless without it.
There's also a bit of an actual sense of danger too unlike 90% of other simulation novels our protagonist is actively putting himself in danger in order to get benefits to live longer in the long term. It's better than playing it safe and living miserably so it makes a lot of sense.
Somewhat generic setting and characters but I honestly don't mind since the execution is rather respectable and a bit amusing at times. This has both personality and potential. 3.5/5.
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The story keeps getting better and better.
I like the fact that the MC has more missions in the same mission worlds unlike one world per mission. It gives author the chance to develop the world background.
The side characters are unlike other cliche novels, where anybody can become the MC's friend only because they were their and had a good character. Also unlike other novels where side characters are all generic, the side characters in Devil's Cage and varied with depth to them. For example:
The great witch, the alchemist, the lover in the SHAMAN WORLD.
The historian, the muscle guy, historian's disciples in the ISOGU WORLD.
The little dependent princess in another world.
And many more.
Also, the MC is always deducing and searching for clues which gives him a detective kind of style which seems much better than the guy in "Thriller Paradise".
Amazing story. There are only a few important errors in editing that can be easily overlooked and the overall quality of the story is great.
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its good
plis continue
I've scanned through this, I like the way it's looking, pinned it to my library, and will give a detailed comment after reading.
Fan fictions are supposed to be free. .
Rough around the edges, but overall it's interesting enough to give readers a good read.
The world building could've been great, but the author gives us confusing infos, there're gods, but how many? What do you get from a convenant with a God? What kind of instrument are there? What are the effect of each instrument? The system/levels? Are some questions that might surface when you read this novel.
Character-wise they're great, the emotion of each meeting and separation could be felt easily.
Plot-wise is already good coupled with the world building.
Honestly, the lore/world is interesting if you could spare a few braincells to visualize this story as a blank paper. Just imagine the world, by each word, don't put in any visualization you might have from cultivation novels. Think of this one as a western novel.
I'm not good at writing these reviews, but having read/reading SGS, I know that this story will be just as great! Can't wait until we get further along down the storyline and learn about this aliens background and its capabilities!