this is one crazy novel well feels like there are 2 MC
and world has started building itself with words oaf author and such enormous potential is rare i hope to see more of this madness
each character is given well deserved attention and it's not too much as well
and grammar and grip on language feels like author is crazily firm in them
A good attempt at novel with Indian history. It leaves much to be desired( beware I am comparing with some of the very good novels on this app) but none the less an entertaining one. I would have loved it more if it was more detailed with clear show of hardship rather then a smooth sailing in start. Anyways good luck for your novel I appreciate the effort of more Indian content.
Very good.
I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story.otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
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I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.
Hi everyone, DNW's author here.
Im sure many of you would be wondering how a novel has so many chapters and no reviews or comments, and that's because it had to be moved here after licensing.
You can find the original here with most of the initial free chapters and all comments and reviews.
https:// w w w .webnovel.com/book/the-dawn-of-the-new-world_11726558706492805
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Pretty good start and I like it's pacing. Though the author feels the pacing is a bit disruptive. I've made it my daily schedule to read a couple of chapters and I'm happy with my resolution to read a bit online. In this day of a pandemic such novels help pass the time
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I like the novel, therefore i will use my awesome powers as a reader to grant you 5 stars.
The author for this novel isn't just one of "BaiSiwa's" fake accounts right?
He doesn't give me the BaiSiwa feeling though...
The feeling BaiSiwa gives is more like he's a demon from hell
ZombieSpy on the other-hand gives a more childish feeling (I like that... It's cute).
spelt Schrödinger wrong multiple times, totally unreadable :p
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