Whats wrong with this story OVerdescribiNg everything to the extent it gets really boring Explaining how he put his hand in a monster head in (the last killing move) took a full half chapter 6 or 7 paragraphs You gan imagine how long the fight took lolThe atory is great but So tar it is 60% fillers
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So far I love the start and can tell there is a ton of potential. The only downside is the 7chapters/week release......................................
First time writing a review, just because of how amazing it is. I haven't read the prequel yet as I found out about it late. But, I am loving it so far. I've read up to chapter 420 and the current latest chapter is 542. It's a nice change of pace from the whole "China #1" and is more uh Hinduish or something, but I enjoyed it. I have put 9 power stones into it as it was the first time I used em and I liked this as I read it.Good Character development. It didn't feel repetitive or boring or predictable. I was very engaged. Which is hard to be in a novel nowadays. The world setting was interesting as while it was similar to the VRMMORPG's, the whole concept of Safe-Zone, Wild-Zone, Battle-Zone, and Special-Zone really added a nice twist to it when the "Game" became/merged with "Reality". Especially the aspect of having no NPCs and only players, while also giving them the ability to respawn in Safe-Zone with no loss, in Wild-Zone with a bit of loss, and Special-Zone was a nice twist too. Usually when a "Game" becomes "Reality
Although this novel is top ranked, I'm gonna have to disagree here. First, I've read to the latest chapter in order to give a honest review. So let's begin. In a sentence: This novel sucks. The world is dull, the plot isn't new or original, the main character is a goof, stupid and most of the time predictible. Why i'm saying that? Everything in this novel belongs to the circle "MC need something - It must get a new profession level - someone understimate him - MC doesn't know a thing about the profession - use the library - pass the examination over 100% mark - everyone is dumbfolded - a lot of face slap - everyone in debt with the MC - Repeat. That's what happen along the whole novel. It sounds original since it's a teacher but there is almost no teaching along the novel, just the MC using his ultra pure zhenqi to help others and his main students are barelly mentioned along the novel. There is no world in the novel. Just random high tier kingdom jumping without map mentioning or proximity. There is barelly no description of the world. The main reason this novel is top ranked is because although the novel sucks, it's half fun to read with eventual laughs along the story. Don't expect too much of it. Sorry for my bad english.
Honestly this is the absolute most repetitive novel I've ever read. It's always the same thing.SIRIOUSLY! EXPECT THIS PANTERN EACH TIME MC MEET SOMEONE: MC just doing his thing--------------->someone will offend him because blah blah blah stupid reason------------->he blah blah blah show his skill and defeat them like it was nothing-----------------> then people will be like "omg how is he 'this and that' , I am so stupid. He is very stronk and better then anyone else. I can't believe I offended such a monster. Brother why didn't you tell me you are an expert if not I wouldn't have offended you and suck your d*ck if you ask. Oh I am oh so not good enough to even receive a glance from your mighty self. You are the greatest of them all "---------------->then he act as if he was just taking it easy and make peaple want to suck his d*ck more. --------------->rince and repeat.This is pretty much the whole novel sorry for spoiler
At 8 years old you can't buy property...unless its different in china the story just doesn't make sense at all..............................................
My first ReviewI understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example:captian instead of The captianyoung man instead of a or the young man said...Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel.Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.
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Book has been so good. Can’t wait for the rest of it.
Wow, your book is wonderful!? I love your introduction and the way you described Wole and his parents. Keep the good work going!❤️
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